Author here~ This is a shameless review lol. Thank you for giving this book a shot
I've done quite a bit of research for this so I'm gonna use that as my basis for my self rating of 5 hehehe. Thank you for the support so far but the novel has only just started.
Please expect more unique stories about the last living civilization in the known universe and the other civilizations in other universes.
The actual genre for this is Sci-Fa (Science Fantasy) but there was no option when i had to select so since the story starts with scifi, I placed it there.
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A very great start to a very interesting story I hope you continue this story it has very great potential for becoming a grate series cant wait for the next chapter.
BIGGEST ISSUE: The ENTIRE romantic conflict of the novel can be resolved by like chapter 10 if the MC just offers one sentence of explanation but instead he says everything but that and it’s infuriating as F.Outside of that: The novel is a bit cringe with its kind of random use of JP words & the overly edgy MC but the writing is otherwise superb IMO. The characters are interesting and I genuinely root for the romance and understand why the MC falls for the ML but the ML doesn’t rly have a reason to like the MC or at least his motives aren’t clear yet (c50).Everything 5/5 besides story which is 3/5 for aforementioned reasons.
Appears to be another novel where the MC gets everything from a system without putting in any effort. Unless lots of people point out that the plot is amazing later, hard pass.
Starting is good. The character development in this also great..
Waiting to look how the other characters are getting developed and how the family sentiments are handled in this.
This novel is guilty of a great crime. it has become yet another addiction. normally I find myself in a fantasy world far from CEO and business, however, today I found the novel to change my mind. I found this early and read every chapter. Waiting for another will be the worst, but when it drops I will be there first.
Chapter 4 currently:
The concept behind this story is good but the execution is subpar at best. The main flaw that the author has is that they rush through things too quickly. Now let’s get to the main points:
Writing Quality: Barely readable. As stated earlier, the author rush through things and doesn’t give characters any type of emotions behind their actions. This make it difficult to understand characters and the action they take.
Story Development: There’s barely anything i can say here since it’s just the start.
Character Design: This is a bad one. Currently, characters have no personality whatsoever. Actions done by them make no sense. Take the “neglected treatment” for example, I doubt that the main cast would allow things to get that far, especially naruto who has been a victim of such thing.
World Background: Literally everything revolves around “Root bad, Danzo bad, Mc and his family are treated badly, woe be me” and it’s annoying. Not to mention how flawed the backstory of the ocs are, Root agents are literally brainwashed till they’re blank state. Danzo is not a character that can trust anyone with that type of information or power. And even if somehow the ocs backstory are somehow true, Danzo literally have failsafes on his root soldiers. I doubt he’ll let the father live since he knows so much.
This is a thot collector novel.
MC: arrogant because he has repeated 10 thousand years of the same day, gaining skills and knowledges.
Because of his arrogance he wants to collect the “hottest” girls knowing that he’ll offend a lot of people while doing so. he also acts mysterious while displaying his skills that he gain in those 10 thousand years.