This is the author's shameless review! If you guys find any mistakes, just comment on them and I'll fix it in a day. Thanks for reading! Also, if you guys have any questions, just reply to this post and I'll answer them as early as possible, I just won't reveal any spoilers.
(Again, I know, it's the exact same as my brother's, I'm just too lazy to create a new one.)
the book was dropped author clearly accepted that this being his first book he didn't know what to do book's jammed with all kind of cliches it's dropped at ch 460 or something
like it
This is my first story to review on this site, but I have reviewed a decent number of stories on other sites. Still I wanted to keep my expectations in check. But, boy, am I blown away. This is one of the best System stories that I have read. The author even goes and creates the tables, even though WN itself is not very conducive as a platform to create those tables.
1. Writing Quality: This is definitely the strongest suit. Author's writing is professional level. Vocabulary, grammar all refined and congruent to the story. No unnecessary use of overly flowery words that impede the progression of the story.
2. Stability of Updates: I see that the author updates regularly
4. Story Development: A steady progression. The pacing is great, not too slow but doesn't feel rushed. The author takes times with fleshing out scenes and characters which is great.
4. Character Design: Speaking of which, very clear, contrasting characters that won't bore you. Clear motivations.
5. World Background: Professionally done. You are immediately immersed into the world and never leave.
Thank you so much, author. I would keep reading. [img=recommend]
This Story is straight up amazing. Its a really creative idea and the depth of the writing really allows you to imagine for yourself. It was like watching an anime while reading a book. One thing though it doesnt seem to update as offten as everyday, but if the release dates were to be more stable then this it would get a 5 star rating from me. Go read it if you haven't now
Writing quality-5
Updating stability-5
Story development-3.5
Character design-2
World Background-5
Honestly the plot and world development are really good, but i just dont really like how the mc is a saint. im fine with nice MCs but this is just a little overboard.
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Absorbing story! It's filled with a lot of captivating factors. The narration is good. I liked the writing flow very much. Although it's not my favourite genre the story kept me interested! It's undoubtedly a good read for me.
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Great sci-fi novel with really good background world building. Everything flows smoothly and is very interesting. I feel that this novel has very good potential in the later chapters, very good, don't want to spoil though, read for yourself.