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really nice novel need more chapters of the legendary novel
I enjoy all of your chapters my dear..
nice story line and I like the way u described your scenes.... Honestly am hooked on your book???????
keep up the good work author!!
It is not a good one. Story developement is horrible. Main character is a complete garbage. Hard to read even 10 chapters. ...................
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It is a good story for binge read... story development is slow ..when will author introduce alll...until now it is shown that sister come in mc room to get check in and mc distribut system and get rewards .. typical urban chinese story
good starter novel for rookie reader that haven't read this kind of genre. other than that, it's painful to read.the story use bad cliche part from KR and CN novel. i can't even pass reading early chapters, so there's no way I'm gonna force myself until ch100+.this novel has potential, i just hope for author to rewrote the novel.
I am loving the fact how synchronous the language and actions are with setting. The author is giving clear and concise outlines of characters and things in every scene. one thing that I really loved is the smoothness and flow of words. Excellent work. Keep it up. Eager to read more.
Great book in all aspects. very satisfied with it. Hoping to see more of it.Pick this book unless..........................................
As a neutral observer and a regular reader I rate this book for the quality of it’s written material and the updated story events it leaves in each and every reader a thrilling chill due to the sequence of events narrated in a very objective style .Each character was clearly described thoroughly in a very simple and objective style in order to make the story quite exciting
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Other then quite a few spelling errors that are all over the place and a few words that were way out of place this novel is pretty good and I recommend reading it
