I have read several chapters of this novel. ??? and I think I fell in love with the story he made by the author of this novel.??? Really very detailed and very good. Keep spirit of writing Author, All the best???
An interested take on a reincarnation story, I'm amazed at how the author can update so frequently. If you can't stand waiting for chapters, give this story a read!
this another trash with the mc hiding his cultivation level for no reason and letting his enemy assasinate him again without retailating, someone try to poison him anf he just let it be
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The Story has a very unique structure.more ever it's feels realistic, the beginning gave the vibe of life realistic experience. The Author did great, giving the back a natural flow understanding to the reader. I can't wait to read more chapters
I liked this story... up to a point.If you are interested in mechs, mech battles and upgrades, this is a story you'll definitely like. This story painted the lifestyle so well it almost made me go out and purchase the latest Mechwarrior game out on Steam!The world background makes sense, the character backgrounds are interesting and a bit mysterious, and their progression makes sense and is consistent.The only thing that was off for me was their emotional states.Most of the time, the emotional reactions of the characters are within human norms and are believable. Kids get frustrated with their parents, or are wary about their teachers, or have a love of mechs because they are "cool". It's later on in the story that I have some issues.When a big loss hits our main character, he doesn't seem sad per se. He just stays around to do what he can then moves on to complete his task. There is little to no reflection of him mourning that loss or that loss affecting him emotionally or inhibiting him. Later, he finds what he has lost but there is no sense of real relief from him. It's just another day, it seems, and life goes on. The same thing happens to the other characters around him. They encounter losses but don't really feel the loss. It's almost like they are brainwashed or on drugs. Or it is just a tragic story that happened on the news. It doesn't affect how they live their lives (even though it happened to them or people they knew).So while overall I'd rate the story as a 4, I am dropping reading this story because of the lack of emotional development of the characters. If you don't really care about that sort of thing and love mech stories, it's worth a read.
It didn't take long for this to become tedious. MC has what is effectively a "sign-in" system, except instead of just getting stuff he fights a fish with a difficulty rating system that he ignores and a reward system that makes him problematically OP within the first dozen chapters. There's a lot of cringe desperately trying to pass as cool; it's basically an interesting premise with some potential, ruined by execution.
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So far I have been loving this book. I read through all that was out in an afternoon. My blood was boiling at the end, asking for mooooaaaarrrrr. I literally have been looking for a vampire book just like this for so long. The way the system works, the way the character has embraced, but not been consumed by his vampirism, I’m fucking hooked. I love it. Okay so, rant over, actual review time. If you want a book that has strong potential to last up to the 1000’s of chapters without being boring through most of it? This is it.You been looking for an actually solid vampire book that isn’t about “boo hoo I’m a vampire” or “ **** I hate vampires let’s kill em” and actually has threshed out intentions behind actions, this is the one.The big upside, is that like other good authors, when the author realizes that he might have made a ****y wucky and made the next part of the book too hard for the character unintentionally , he gives the character a bit of plot armor the actually makes sense instead of a ****ty glaring armor. And when the author actually plans to make it hard for the character? Bam! Boi get slapped and stands back up.This is the book for you. You disagree? Your wrong. It’s for you.? ? ?
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Thhe writer is very strategic. I totally can relate. For the story itself, i would say it is very well written for it is something everyone can relate to.