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Tiene buena trama y todo, pero es demasiado confuso y dificil de leer. Primero estaban contandole una historia y derrepente aparecio con una herida, luego de que estaban en Bravoos y despues en Poniente. Debería explicar mejor las cosas. Pero en si la tama hasta ahora es buena
I am tired of these video game novels coming in. The good ones gets pushed back at the back or worse never see the light afterwards. It's getting harder to read with anticipation. Same old type getting recycled.
It has a concept similar to The World Online and even almost the same name, but it is very different, different gameplay. I liked it a lot, I hope more, I found some small bugs, but nothing that makes me go down to 4 stars, could there be zombie players in the future? By being infected while connected and the zombie's mind would still stay connected.
Hey guys!ApocX here! If you didn't start reading this novel, I suggest you start right now. It is definitely something you will enjoy, especially for those VRMMO and Romance novel fans! ;)Don't mind the shameless 5 Star Rating.Update Schedule - Daily.I still have my main novel Stronghold In The Apocalypse to write so I can't write more.Enjoy reading! :)P.S If you leave a bad review for the story, then make sure it's something that would help in the improvement of the story, because I sure as hell would delete it.
i like how you have portrayed the MC since he was young instead of being someone who is already in his teens, the MC is strong but noway he without faults
Excellent work! I hope this book would bear fruit to you, author! And I hope your readers would love it! Writing quality for me it's around 4/5 (but I am generous right now so 5) There are multiple things I'd like to point out such as passive voice misuse, filter words, showing techniques, and some words that you need to delete. This include: *boring life (you need show the scene that would say that the MC has a boring life instead of telling it*no friends- the same goes to this one*was full of- passive voice misuse*he saw- filter words*he began to read- delaying the sentence*was sleeping-passive voice misuse
Is this harem? I Know there is no harem tag, But a few of the reviews i have read seems to argue otherwise. Haren is not my cup of tea and i will appreciaTe an early warnIng
Stop treating us like trash.I love everything about this novel and I spend my money so I can read and support the translators. You don’t give us a heads up, you don’t give us reasons. If you guys are running this to make money then do a good job.
one doesn't need to go far to see how awesome this book is, it captivates you right from the beginning, and the further you go the better it becomes
I only have read 4 chapters so I don'r think I have any qualifications to write a review but still whoever is interested in it can read mine. So in the first 4 chapters we have a game picking that he can't choose himself, a mc that can steal other people of their hard work basically crippling them. So far so good can both be accepted even though I don't like that he didn't choose it himself the second one is preference I don't mind it if he is a little 'evil?'. But the Problem for me is that in chapter 4 a new Funktion of monopoly was activated which is just something seemingly unavoidable which is easily avoidable and which ist just making problems and forcing him to be known by everyone and being in the limelight... Id that isn't enough When you look at the chapter title that thing gods on for another 30+ chapters or so to resolve it.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................