A new book. Buh I'm seeing a lot of potential. just added to my library.
Awesome book, author. keep it up.I'm going to support your book no matter what.
You're too slow to tools a story. Let's go update ahead. I'm waiting and get wetting
This book is great from the first and last chapter, It does not explain anything so much. like, not using in-depth sentences to every paragraph, making it not so boring to read at all. Also the cliffhanger and mystery is also well planned, need more chapter?
very interesting and good novel, I love it
Your web novel demonstrates a strong foundation with its mix of magic, action, and personal development. The protagonist’s journey from an uncertain fighter to a key player in a war is captivating, and the blend of magic and martial skills adds an exciting dynamic to the plot. The world-building, including the guilds, dungeons, and the political tension between kingdoms, is well-thought-out, giving the reader a sense of scale and depth.Character relationships, like the bond between the protagonist and Kessia, provide emotional grounding amid the action, creating a nice balance between personal growth and larger conflicts. The inclusion of powerful figures, such as Lyria and the kingdom's strongest magician, adds to the tension and stakes of the story, making it feel epic in scope.However, some aspects could benefit from further polishing. The pacing of certain events, especially during battles, can be overwhelming at times, leaving less room for reflection or emotional impact. Additionally, the protagonist’s inner thoughts and emotions could be explored further to strengthen the reader's connection to them.Overall, the novel shows great promise with its creative world and character development, but refining the pacing and emotional depth will make it even more engaging.
Bruh what a gem! Dont miss this one guys if the author keeps this novel updated this while be one of the greatest of this website. ......
I like the book and the writing. My only complaint was personal preference. The MC honestly is a tad wimpy. It seems like he is literally crying every 2 or 3 chapters. Again this is preference and maybe him being overly emotional is by design. I’m just more adjusted to a tougher MC in these type of stories.
Funny MC and The world building, no a game building is good! keep updated, please!
Es muy bien la historia el desarrollo del personaje principal rick con su aceptación de su deseo sexual, sus personajes secundario como Verónica están bien expresados sus motivaciones en la trama y por último pero no menos importante la escenas de ***o están increíbles más de 1 ves lo releiInglés It is very well the story the development of the main character rick with his acceptance of his sexual desire, his secondary characters like Veronica are well expressed their motivations in the plot and last but not least the *** scenes are amazing more than 1 see it reread
With just the title, it seemed to have potential. Looking great with just the title and cover. The synopsis made me hooked instantly, it captivated my heart. Reading a few chapters, the flow was nice and not choppy to read. The author was talented so the novel was in good hands! Cheers!
Well, i've read all the chapters, paid ones included, and i can say it's not my piece of cake. i like a lighthearted story where i can relax and enjoy some piece and quiet. but this story is a joke. i tried to look past the author's attempt at jokes, but it got too far and it kinda ruined the mood. the premise of someone with trash talent somehow with only wits and his cheat to overcome his condition and rise above all else was intriguing but it somehow got made into a joke with author's attempt at jokes. overall, i want my money back