PLEASE KEEP UPDATING THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!!
grammar is good but it kinda feels like this story is AI generated , it lacks first person perspective kinda like i am reading summary of the book, author you wasted my time
Overall this is a great story! I enjoy the many different characters and the world building that goes on in this novel. My favorite character is Cliff haha and I have really enjoyed his character progression throughout the story and am always excited whenever he has some screentime (please have more chapters for Cliff to satisfy my craving lol) This was the first story that i have been invested in on this platform and will continue to support the journey!
Let me just say, I LOVE Rowan. He is so sweet and I want him to be happy. Wren is perfect for him. He is HOT. I love that he is dangerous to everyone else, but has a soft side he only shows his Caretaker. I can't wait for things to get spicy. The writing is amazing. Very easy to read and engaging. Author, thank you for sharing this story and please keep up the good work!
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OMG... This novel a great bro?? wuuuhh. It said " you must write one hundred forty character." Phaaa its idiot... OMG it said "Not yet." Who are you bitch computer??
Broo it's been a year but I'm still waiting for you to release a new chapter bruhhh when are you going to release a new chapter ?
The author have the ingredient on writing the story, the author's writing style is descriptive! With the author's writing style, I can hear the sound and I can imagine the surroundings. On the synopsis, the author wrote if you are into "realistic fantasy powered by science
Great sci-fi thriller with solid world building, The story is well paced and I enjoy the tiny scientific facts you slip in from time to time. Quite educational if you ask me. I love the mind bending time paradoxes which kinda makes the tenses confusing, which further makes it interesting and develop the plot.Your synopsis should've been longer so people will get a glimpse. It doesn't matter though, I'm glad I found this. Please write faster, I want to see where the story goes especially now that the heat is getting intense.
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Pretty good start for a novel. Looking forward for more