I captivating storyline. couldn't stop myself from reading more and more chapter go for it
This book is really interesting, it has an interesting plot line and theme, the characters development is relatable and captivating. I really recommend this book
Somebody did this author dirty. Posting her book with no chapters.
Another ChatGPT garbage with no speck of substance whatsoever.
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Read a bit in and I can already see that this story is about to be peak! From the way it is written to the characters — everything has so much potential!10/10 for me, gonna keep reading.
Haven't quite read all of the chapters yet, but I am enjoying this so far!The Good: We have a unique story and world, and I personally love Mecha! The ensemble of characters is varied without everyone just being completely reliant on the MC. I am pleasantly surprised at how good the grammar is for a first novel.The Bad: Some chapters are completely in bold, others are not. We have a unique world with a lot of characters, but most of them are missing details, and so is the world. The plot feels rushed, and some of the character relationships are forced without any sort of history to back them up aside from the implied friendship of Ryker and Lyra. Basically, stating their teamwork would be unbeatable after assembling a team half a chapter ago is really hard to swallow.The Neutral: We're missing so many details, but this is your first novel and will be a good experience! Personally, I would like to see more of the world. What is the academy? What is the power source of magic? Why does everyone seem to know about the Shadow Games? I get that you have a story in your head and want to share it with others because you think they will enjoy it too. This is great! Just try and remember that we can only perceive what you show us. If you have the MC and his new teammates become best friends within half a chapter, it is possible, but show us. Lastly, the chapters get automatically numbered, so if the 1.5 chapter is like a glossary of sorts, put it in its own auxiliary volume and remove the chapter # from the titles so we don't keep reading things like "Chapter 14: Chapter 12: Tactical Training"
J'ai vu que tu es français donc je me permets de faire la critique dans cette langue.J'ai vraiment accroché à l'histoire, je trouve que tu as réussi à trouver un bon équilibre entre l'histoire/aventure et la documentation. Je me suis également attaché à Adam (j'aimerais bien avoir des pov de ses amis) et j'ai hâte de lire la suite.Merci pour le partage !
This book is really good. The story is unique, and Sam's journey as a snake is fun to follow. If you're looking for something different, definitely give this one a try.
"What! Just this?" Light shouted a little angry.
My name isn't Carl, you fool. They named us as they want, what do they think we are?
"Oh, I have not yet desu," Kenji answered.