She was so upset that she didn't know where she was she just kept on walking.
"It should be true that I am your only grandson, but your only granddaughter is in danger! Anyways, Grandfather, I was very glad to see you however I must return to save my family." With that, he started to walk away.
Mesla: I understand, sorry for doubting you.
Picked this up randomly for my next review. Please heed the mature rating while reading this story, trigger warnings of abuse and rape.I honestly hated the prologue, the family's behaviour to MC comes off as too artificially exaggerated and topped off with the rape scene that made me cringe (I personally hate exaggerated abuse and rape scenes). The writing, however, was surprisingly good so I gave it another chance and decided to follow my typical ritual of reading to chapter 10 before reviewing. I actually read on for more than that before reviewing in the end.I have to admit, this story is a diamond in the rough. Up until where I left off, the MC is still an immature girl trying to play a game she thought she knew the rules to. To point out specifically, she was still emotionally stunted despite her age, typical for someone who went through abuse and trauma. Her charcater is realistic, and she does suffer from the consequences of her own actions. That was much appreciated since most stories tends to gloss over that for their protagonist. She has potential to be a properly fleshed out strong MC in the future.Story wise, world building and background is lacking, but that's not exactly the focus of the story. You know enough and it doesn't hinder the plot overall. I like that she stays in the world longer because she has multiple targets. Hopefully there will be more world building when an interesting world comes around.Obviously, there are plot holes and cliches. I also appreciate that the author doesn't wave the rape trauma all over the reader's face to solicit sympathy for the MC. The insidious undertones is also another nice touch to the story. Overall, it is a surprisingly good read and has potential to be better. Keep up the good work, it's going into my library.
Seo : You... Are quite beautiful... Ermmm??
"What do you think I am ? Bill gates? Don't expect me to make a multi million corporation in a year or two without any knowledge. Getting godly subordinates? Please if anyone was that good they'd Long been scouted, even if such a genius was unnoticed what are the odds that I'd ever meet them. Sheesh novels are so unrealistic" Seriously she got her own hopes up for no reason.
Anna was angry but her angry tone was also very cute "You can't mix all the dishes before beforehand what reason it may be."
Inspecting the ball for elements popping out, Fannie made a surprised look.
They all receive the results in an anonymous email. The results are disclosed by word of mouth and an approximate ranking was distributed through instagram. They all get 1 academic credit in their student account. Overall everyone's received 2-4 for turning in homework and completing daily tasks. There is an overall standard to graduate and there is a decent distribution system (mentioned later, still thinking of slice of Life and OP ability).
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been having a blast, the comedic moments are gold
bot reviews ffff