Just 1 chapter, and I'm hooked. I can't wait to read more! My mouth is watering, and my stomach is full of butterflies. Is this love or obsession ???
Ahhhhh, where do I even begin with this one? This story’s got potential—a real banger, easily top 50 on WebNovel. Grammar’s a bit shaky, but hey, it’s good enough that you don’t mind too much. But then… the author starts hittin’ you with clichés, and the MC? Man, he was this close to turnin’ into a full-on wimp. Glad he finally grew a pair and took out those bastards after they killed the servant woman, but that scene? Just one giant, nasty cliché. It’s no wonder the comments went radio silent after that chapter.This coulda been one of the greatest stories on here, but I think the author’s got it twisted. Just ‘cause the MC starts out as a servant doesn’t mean he needs some grand tragedy to justify becoming a villain. Hate to break it to ya, but this guy? He’s no villain. Not even an anti-hero. Dude watches the woman who raised him get forced to stab herself just ‘cause someone ordered it, and what’s he do? Flashes some “killing intent” and just stands there. Like, buddy, you just got her killed. Could’ve seen it coming a mile away—these people tried to pull something shady just a day before, and he’s still clueless. And then he goes on to snag the top spot in the academy did he think they were gonna congratulate him? Makes no sense.I’ll say it again: even the lowliest servants back in the day knew when to break a rule, throw a punch, stand up for somethin’. Sure, some got killed for it, but at least they went out with their heads held high. They didn’t just stand around lookin’ dumb while people they cared about got hurt. It’s time the author dials down on the “tragic backstory” nonsense and gives us an MC who’s got a bit more grit, ‘cause right now, he’s fallin’ flat. If the Mc story is rewritten, take out a the one big cliche, and think of a creative way for him to gain enemies or become the villain you desire, story is easily up there for one of the top reads….good luck to the author
This book has some margin for improvement.The chapters are really short. Still, the fact that the chapters are short make the story somewhat fresh and light, and this I like very much.But…The writing is a bit confusing a few times. I get that the author is trying to capture the scene in a… let’s say "spontaneous" way, but this strains readability, and curiously, verisimilitude.So far neither the characters nor the works have much depth, making it hard for me to relate to the story.All in all, not my cup of tea, but I hope the author keeps improving. Wish you the best of luck!
never a delay in updating mister author??keep up the good work and I like the excellent description of characters ? looking forward to the adventure of monke and friends ❤️☺️
Great storyGreat charactersSome of the best world building I’ve readI really did this to cover the review asking the author to add MC’s mom into the Harem
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It's an interesting story as far as I went, but I can't continue reading it, the grammar and syntax are killing me. It takes all the joy away from me and ruins the immersion in it. It's like I can understand the story while at the same time can't and it ticks me off.If author gets a proof reader or improves later on, I will come back, probably..
The main character is the young (teenage?) Celestial Emperor, who escapes from home to explore the lower realms. Having never left home before because of his helicopter parents, he has no idea what life is like for mere mortals. He's OP, having mastered every skill as part of his training for being Celestial Emperor, and has reached what seems to be the peak level of cultivation. The plot of the novel so far is that he comes to the mortal realms and starts trying to travel incognito, but inadvertently shows his OPness, causing shock and awe and slapped faces everywhere he goes.Overall I like the idea of the novel, but the author's insistence on stretching every face slapping event over several chapters killed my enjoyment of the story at round chapter 83. It's really not worth your time to read this until it has been completed, then you can skim the chapters to get the gist without being molested with filler after filler.
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