Jin could already think of 4 ways on how to defend these Rooster Snaketail... However, Jin wonders if these Rooster Snaketails and the Crockatrice are from the same ancestor.
The Smiling Demon bit her lip and scuffed her toe against the flood like a scolded child, before looking back up at Sara with a terrifying look in her eyes. Like Sara was a buffet and she was a starving beggar, "I can't help it- you know that!"
Interesting concept to basically combine multiple/all cliches of your typical xianxia novel into one.
If you’re planning to read this novel, let me give you a quick update for those who enjoy analyzing logic or simply reading for fun.One thing I didn’t like about this novel is how the MC changes over time. At the start, he’s portrayed as this cold, cool, and detached character. But as the story progresses, he starts trying to change himself. I get that the author is trying to show character development, but it feels inconsistent. If the MC is supposed to be an assassin, shouldn’t he remain cold and hardened, at least for a while? What’s the point of emphasizing his assassin background if he’s not going to act like one?Another issue is the way the MC tries to save some slaves. This isn’t a bad plot point in itself, but it’s poorly executed. The MC deliberately gets himself kidnapped to infiltrate the group and save them, but it’s full of logical inconsistencies. For instance, the MC has mana, yet none of the kidnappers notice it—except for a girl in the same cell.Let me explain the backstory. The MC takes over the body of someone who has recently died. This body was running away from the kidnappers before its death. Here’s where it gets strange: why aren’t the kidnappers questioning how he’s alive again or how he suddenly has mana? In this world, a person’s mana is detectable through their hands, so it should’ve been obvious.The reason the MC wants to save the slaves is because he sees himself in them, which is fine. But the real reason—revealed by the author—is that a princess is among the captives, though the MC doesn’t know this yet. The whole setup feels like a typical cliché: save the beauty, and she falls for the hero instantly without a second thought.Now, the logic behind the escape plan is where things completely fall apart. The MC plans to run away with the captives, but anyone who understands human nature knows it’s not that simple. Some captives are injured, sleep-deprived, or starving. When people are scared, human nature kicks in, and things can turn ugly. Some will betray others to survive, and others might even resort to violence for their own sake.This lack of realism bothers me because the MC is supposed to be an assassin—someone who has seen the worst of humanity. He should understand human betrayal and the complexities of survival. Instead, the author glosses over these issues, making everything too easy. It feels like the author isn’t considering the bigger picture, which makes the story frustrating to read."Now if you read this far I did use ChatGPT to fix some of my writing but it changed most of my work but it still the same everything is the same but it has a more complex writing that I don’t put in my writing.”
A+
I like it just the way it is. Only had a minimal error and tge authr is nice we just need a lot of reader so that the author doesnt drop hehehe. Right @DaoOfTheMoon
I love this story and I can't wait for more, I need to know what happens next, please update please!I love how they use Harrison's name if he's doing something but when the others talk to him they use his new name Hadrian, it's like they are trying to sperate them but at the same time bring them together, two half's of the same whole.Otiz seems to be cute I wonder what he looks like
Same plot and clicHe. good read if uou leAve Your mInd ar home. Wbat If president Is weeak butStill mAke it to hero and beats people with inteelect . Say good buy thne
This is a really good story. At first, when I saw Trace System I thought it would be a system with Trace On from Fate Stay Night. But the author didn't do that, he gave us a completely awesome original story which is so amazing.
An amazing information. It explains the goods and bad and acts as a medium for the author to talk to the viewers. The plot is amazing, it explains all and how Webnovel novels are. The Author’s book fits his synopsis.69420/10
Ha ha ha im shame less enough to give my self a review of 5 stars ?????The story is an Indian epic .......................................................................................
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