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I expected no less and the Author’s writing ability is up-to par. It’s comedic and the MC performs as you’d expect him to as according to his personality instead of going Off Character.In other words it’s a good read.
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Chapter 10 Status:Writing Quality: ⭐️ MTLStability of Updates: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ One chapter a day or soStory Development: ⭐️⭐️ I am to lazy to write, but it=s worse than those novels in Trial readsCharacter Design: ⭐️⭐️ Bland, one dimensional characters with 0 depth or personalityWorld Background: ⭐️⭐️ Only a little is explained at the start, but it‘s incomplete, disorganized and useless for the most part
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literally a scam, the moment you get past the free chapters the translation quality drops, characters change names every chapter, sometimes changing multiple times in a chapter it's just so unpleasant to read.
i like this one the plot is kind of new to me so it pique my interest and overall its pretty good to me.Well this is my only opinion so ill support this one.
Much better than I’m Really a Superstar in my opinion considering it's an original.Unlike I’m Really a Superstar this focuses on showbiz rather than jumping from one thing to another.
As a person whose read the Raws up to 300. I can no longer recommend this. Would you believe if I told you MC still believes himself to be a commoner after what he’s done? Would you believe that 300 chapters past... and yet nothing accomplished! All of this is just Drama. It’s killed a lot of my brain cells. So I suggest you stop reading this till there’s more chapters, you’ll see that I’m right since nothing going to happen if you read every update. Sigh. The system becomes completely insignificant in the story, what happen to gaining immortality? This is not a story. Author is just another wordslave.
Seems far from Perfect, but still i Will give this a chance.For now this looks like something made by complete ******* without any idea how to make decent story.Also 10000 years Old protagonist is acting like 8 yr Old.Also momcrest.
This is a compulsory 5 stars rating from the author ;)Hope you guys enjoy the story. The first arc is pretty much Hollywood Delight on steriod. Just with the power to manipulate time.All the boring bits are fast pace to get to the juicy parts. Sex scene are plenty, especially ones that I really want to write about. Lots of face slapping and so on.Kingdom building part is later. Just imagine tanks running over a bunch of medieval knights. ;)Anyway, enjoy the story.
Honestly this book is really good, but sadly the stability of the updates is ****. Please improve the translation frequency. The suspense is killing me!.