this novel good to reading in pass of time
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This really challenged my mind as I was trying to break down exactly what's happening. The suspense is amazing and it just keeps growing. I hope it reaches a climax as satisfying as the build up
simple to say it has an interesting dark story world building is still going on at first it was base on post apocalypse theme still surpriseingly good development
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I started reading only for the harem so, until now there is already a waifu, and I really like the way the protagonist handles himself, they just need to try to highlight the characteristics of the characters.
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So far im really enjoying this novel. the grammar isnt bad and though some earlier chapters may need some editing, i believe over all, its not bad.The beginning was a bit rushed but if you over look that the slower pace the novel has after the first few chapters is really nice. The characters arent perfect and they seem pretty human to me. We still havent seen too much developement with danny and ivan but im sure itll come. it is quite early into the novel after all. The powers are interesting, and its nice to see them not too overpowered right from the beginning. Johnathan may have a very op ability but its good that he has restrictions on it. Over all, for where it is right now, I believe it deserves 5 stars. however that might change later on so thats when ill do a follow up review.
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Its a good story......I just hope that it might go on like kingdom manga..........that story is a long term one and i want this to be a long term one as well.......
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