Tora saw Kyouka was getting embarrassed from the remark the princess made, so she embraced her into a tight hug while smiling at her as a form of encouragement— but held her a bit longer pressing their bodies together as a bit of revenge for what just happened.
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After looking at him he released his own aura which overlapped with the other. To show that no matter what he was still an Emperor. Instead, it did not cancel out his aura but both were in a showdown of there own this astonished the Emperor even.
By this point, the toast was a lovely golden brown. She removed them from the oven, distributing two halves per serving, and liberally applied butter to them. she also added a slice of cheese to the top half-muffins.
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this is a honest review from a honest author.you may already know about what's the main idea of this novel is, yep this is a pile of my dropped novel.by the time i upload this review there was 3 novel that i has dropped and add as this novel chapter.hope that i will never never added a new dropped novel here.
First off this is really well written. Writing about MOBA's can get tricky because you risk a massive info dump, but I think the author has done a great job of it while keeping it interesting. I like the character types, but I feel they are too rigid in their archetype, I would have liked a little more gray and less black/white. Still that is fine and the archetype for the mc is particularly interesting. My real problem with the characters is their age vs how they behave/talk, they definitely behave/talk above their age.I hope the author continues doing such a good job and we get to see a really good coming of age story.
there's too little chapters, therefore little interest to read it
The author is reviewing himself, I know it's biased but one review wouldn't hurt. Plus, I'm here to give you an extra overview of the novel. English is not my first language, and I would like to apologize for any mistakes you might see. I have been writing this for almost a month, and there (currently) 47 chapters, so you can see the stability of the updates. I try to update once a day and would update more if this novel gets the top rankings (hopefully, fingers crossed). I spent most of my time on the character design and giving them depth, while also minding the originality of my novel. I don't know if I'm going the right path, but I wish you enjoy this journey no matter what. As a summary of the world, it's an age of modern magic. There are dungeons but there also magic gunmen, flying ships, and other feats of magic technology. The world is filled with dungeons and hidden dangers, and the purpose of them would be explained later down the line. The unique thing about my novel is legacies. They are contracts that transcend time and space between two people, one alive and one dead. The dead ones of the past leave a part of their will (soul) and powers in return of asking for something. The protagonist isn't the only one who have this, many do. Our protagonist, however, has a young legacy that let's him increase his strength (stats). I wrote this novel after reading many of this genre, hoping to make one that doesn't lack what others lacked, hoping for a new fun novel to emerge into the world. I'm still a newbie author, and I wish for everyone's guidance. Let's have fun together!
waiting for next chapter.keep updating and make story line up perfect.
"You heard me. Punch me," he said. I shrugged as if to say, "Not gonna be my fault then," and then tried to punch him right in the face.
The story is interesting. It keeps you captive and author can do better in writing. Fantasy story are really good choice while choosing a book.