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Very good novel, not the greatest translation still reasonable. However very let down with Azrael being Azzy/Rael half the time also hate the romance with him and Claire. Honestly think its better to kill her off because the entire thing is trash even getting together was stupid.
While I have not caught up with the stories release I’m at around chapter 175 as I write this.This has been an excellent and well written story thus far. Very few minor grammatical mistakes to be seen.While I can’t say much about the stability of uodates as I’ve not caught up completely. I see the updated mark consistently enough on the story to know that it is being written by the so author still.Story has been progressing well. There have been times that I’ve felt it’s been slow and there are other times that it picks up the pace. I am not a big fan of the repeated paragraphs from previous chapters in the new chapter that this author does. It would only be useful if the author didn’t update for like a month and I needed a refresher on what happened previously. As it is I consider it unnecessary padding to increase the word count of the chapter.Characters so far have filled what I consider the anime cookie cutter. We have our kind hardworking but determined ML, the cold but warm FL (whom gets described every time she shows up. We get it she’s as pretty as a goddess.) And now we have the cute bratty little sister character.The world is very interesting and vast and we aren’t overloaded with facts. They are wonderfully peppered throughout the story. So we are learning about it along with our ML. Which I enjoy immensely.All in all a very solid good book. Worth reading and spending your fast passes or coins on.
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I'm not very much into romance but that's just me. It also needs more detail. Everything goes by too quickly and I can't comprehend what's going on. Otherwise a very good read!
great story. awesome book and character development......just need more frequent chapter updates........
As in my previous comment I emphasize that it is rushing the story and not doing real world building, I will add that there is a huge problem with the interaction of the characters and the plot in general, where did they meet? When? How did they meet? How was the process of finding a publisher? When did the MC start acting classes? How did he meet his teacher, being that he's a renowned former actor? How was the audition for the role in the theater play and when did it happen?Honestly, I don't want to sound condescending but it is necessary that you as an author acquire the mentality of asking questions in order to be able to flesh out the plot, because in the current picture it seems that the character just gets the things he wants without any difficulty, besides, it sucks that you put things in that should be implied, such as the character's lack of general inexperience in what is due to things like business, among other things. It takes time to improve, take your time and start acquiring a more inquisitive mindset and this will greatly improve your writing.
So in the beginning I thought this novel had potential. The Cheat didn't seem too OP(I was wrong), the MC made some actually smart and careful decisions(that stopped completely somewhere after chapter 10) and the side characters seemed to have their own goals and thoughts(Didn't really change, thay just aren't relevant any more, except to boost the MC when it is convenient).So what went wrong?1. The cheat became the motherload of all stupid loot boxing mechanism. The advantages keept compounding(Breathing technique to gain 1XP per level with no actual effort/time investment after level 10) and every other skill is literally pay to win. I have not a single clue why the MC is even training anything besides the necessary amount to gain control of his own body. Archery training is especially useless.2. As mentioned above, the Breathing Technique is king, investing every available Exp in it is only logical and way more efficient than anything else the MC could do. It is not even explained why the MC stop investing after he rightfully recognized how important that skill is. It is just skipped out.3. Story got a lot more monotonous and boring after the Side-Characters stopped being relevant.
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Nice plot , good characters and fine setting. I am intrigued by the good introduction of this book and I hope that it will not be dropped . more update please
THANKS AUTHOR FOR THIS GREAT NOVEL ......... well that's it and i love this novel by~~
So far, when I read until chapter 7, the story flows naturally, neither too slow nor too fast, so I immensely enjoyed it.There are still some grammatical errors, but they're not too distracting, so I can still leave them alone.I don't know how the main character will develop. Still, after seeing his new life in that fantasy world, for some reason, I feel a terrible feeling that he will start an adventure with a kind and clean heart, of course maybe the author sometimes dirtied it a little with dust, but I'm sure the base is still white, so I think a story with the main character like that is not my taste, of course, this is all just my assumption after reading up to 7 chapters.