One of the best original novels on this site... even though there are thing that I like and diskile in this novel, overall, is a good read to me. (SPOILER ALERT)What I like:- very good pacing- very good grammar- smart and calculative mc- ruthless mc- hardworking mc- solus (really usefull companion/ai/equipment)- nana (his 'magic mentor' i really enjoy the interations with the old perky magician lol)- character grow (we can see how the characters grow along with the progress of the novel, even though its more mc focused, but i dont have any problems with that)What I dislike:- the nobles/young masters trope- his older brother, that seems going to be an annoying factor through the novel, or at least will come back and bite him in the a*s...- the 'hidding true strength and look like a scrub' trope... ( well i can understand the hiddind strength part since its logical when you are at the bottom, but so far we have a somewhat ugly mc, i mean every one in his family is somewhat decent and only him and his father seem to be the ugly ones...)(note: he seems to get better looking with each increase of his magic core, but it seems that at best he will be average, which i will be ok with, as long as he doesn't remain ugly lol)Even though the beginning of the novel may seem slow, or somewhat confusing, it works as an introduction to the mc personality, and help us understand him better, so I suggest that u should read at least 10 chaps before diciding if u like it or not, thats what I always do.
Love this fast pace novel. He tells the important things but you don't have the feeling something is missing. I don't like the novels where you read how beautiful that girl is for 3/4 of the chapter. No one's cares about that. If he gets a little 18+ action with her than it's OK but the crap that literally every girl is a fucking "beauty" is annoying me.If you like an overpowered Mc who destroys everything than this novel is perfect for you
Its an ok story, if the goddamn girlfriend filler chapters were cut out it would be way better. Holy crap sometimes i wonder if the author is obessed with trying to make it seem like young romance. Why does half the chapter have to be texts between the mc and his girl?!?! Jesus Christ he even describes the emojis! You can just look at the chapters name and if it sounds like his girl is a part of it just skip it as nothing interesting happens. This novel is so full of nonsense its not even funny. A sadly watered down story that vividly describes emojis is my final say.Thank you for reading my rant btw?
1075-1078 missing
waiting for more chapters
This book was amazing....but I need closure.
Enjoyed it and the whole story was there to the end.
This book is something else, love it sooo much
it's really nice story
this is so good
Muse is incredible!!! Loved this book each book is so unique and tells a fantastic story
Waiting for update