The synopsis makes me thought of a famous Japanese Novel's(or Chinese novel), where all mc reincarnated or stuck inside the game. Wherein they meet white lily's(typical harem), brain dead antagonists, fatty bro's, cute pet-kun anddddd etc??? But I'm hoping that I'm wrong and there's no cliché. For now I'll stockpile the chapter until it reaches to hundreds of chapters.
Some advice for the Author. Please note that this is meant as constructive criticism, not complaining, as I love the story.You really need to get an English Thesaurus to broaden your vocabulary and help find more appropriate descriptive words. I know others have spoken to you about "lowly" being used improperly already (should word swap every instance of "lowly" with "softly"), but some other words are really out of place as well. For example; "nodding furiously in agreement". Furiously is a word normally used to describe a degree of anger. It "can" be used to describe intensity, but "nodding furiously" will throw off your readers because it implies anger (check the definition of the root word "fury" to better understand why). There are several other words that would better describe the visual you were intending, such as "vigorously
This was the very first time I read a novel like this and gladly my experience was not bad. I read quite a lot of chapters before writing this review. The story development was good, though author can use Grammarly for better grammar. that's all...this Novel is worth a shot.
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Its a very good book i wanted to do this review from a long time but always lacked time. i read this book 600 chs on some other site when i not had webnovel and i liked it. its must read for harem lover, though story has a unique concept so some may like it but they will only be a minority. If u looking for some plot with scenes plus less bs drama and tired from reading all those bad novels give this a go. i will read it again once enough chs are stockpiled.Once again author for writing this book.?If any of you have read my work here u cn trust my words and dive in this story if the tags matches to what you are lookin for.
this novel feels like heavy influenced by another Chinese novel AGAINST THE GODS with less faceslap and brain dead young masters .Any way I like this novel except sometimes bcs of too much kindness of mc. mystery behind beyond heaven king force readers to countinue reading this novel.If anyone want to read similar to Against the gods novel this one is worth spending time. i have many questions but there is no discord for this novel. like why mc didn't practice his main cultivation technique so far he only unlocked level 2 and there are 7 level more left and he is already top of divine realm.
good sir, i have read a lot of cultivation novels ranging from the classics and the new ones and i can confidently say that this is one of the best if not the best. it has a lot of qualities that i loved like the cunning of mc, the mystery that uncovers later on. you have done a splendid job writing this masterpiece. you have used the technological advancement of earth well. you also made a reason for the reason why our mc cultivates his way and what he seeks since the beginning. i am merely writing this to thank you for your hard work and to tell you that your work is appreciated my friend. so here is a 5 star rating for you and i hope you keep striving to get better and improve your story further.
I dont even want to write a real review because I know it'll just be deleted ?????????????????????????????????????????????????
The novel in it self is very niche, the characters are developed in a weird sense of obedience and mannerisms. The progression is satisfying however as of recent the translation quality can only be labelled as a "expert machine translator" its piss poor and i regret buying privilege.
Great lighthearted novel! It seems as though the novel is planned out from the very beginning. Things that are happen hundreds of chapters back are connected to things currently happening. R-18 content is written very well and does not occur too much that it detracts from the plot. The story is also very interesting and not your typical weak to strong MC story. Comedy is also great in this novel.
This novel now is really annoying. There are nothing interesting happening. First , you have the MC who don't focus enough on cultivation. For a cultivation novel , you have more romance and drama than action . The MC have too much background; the grandma, the lu sisters , the inspector (su han), the disciple of Qi niu ...That's too much. The Mc didn't have enough life and death battle. Secondly, the MC is a idiot(you can see that even with his cultivation , he can't have a perfect score in exam) why is that? Because of his stupidity he accidently launch a war betwen the dragon clan. There are too much to say so i will go straight; WHY NOTHING SERIOUS HAPPENING EVEN AFTER MORE THAN 300 CHAPTERS?
I given this novel Many expectations , but unfortunately it did not meet it. The story is ridiculously slow and the information is given all at once, which increases the difficulty of reading, understanding and enjoying it.