TimVic
Resonate at the same frequency and sing a good Andi chorus "World affairs are not difficult to legislate, but it is difficult to act according to the law. It is not difficult to hear, but speaking and effective. It's hard to be."Confucius's words traveled through historic events. He always warns us that Andi is our concern. Please focus.Andi played an important role in running the conference, promoting the rapid development of society and promoting economic development, but it brought about a series of non-negligible problems, such as Andi's focus only on Andi's surface. Is sorrowful. Really understanding Andi's implications has damaged Andi's potential for sustainable development.In this sense, the correct use of Andi's sharp blade is especially important to help Andi's comprehensive and rational operation. Therefore, Andi's is centralized. In the first place, it will be the basic way for a country to prosper, become stronger, revitalize the country and make people happy.
A worthy book by all standards. Grammar is incredible. Action scenes, out of this world. Character design is great. World background, acceptable and the story development is just on point. No info. Dumps too. I doubt there will be a critic here on the review page. There's just no fault.
This sounded like it would be a fun little romp, I was wrong. This book takes a great premise and idea and makes it difficult for anyone to dare to do so ever again. It the greatest letdown I have had from this site, considering my already abysmal standards.Read this if you hate yourself or are a catholic and trying to torture yourself to atone for your sins.
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a nice idia but it was so poorly executed that this novel has become a really low quality one, its uninteresting , Writing style is just straight up bad. its not immersive at all and narrative just added another bad end to it. overall its bad really bad.
oh it has me hooked now new chapters please ........ .....waiting ........waiting .. ......waiting. .......waiting........waiting... .....waiting ....waiting
Pretty good read so far. Enjoyable and fun. It is still very early for a full review, but I have to say that it's looking really good so far. Well done author!
It's rare that I write a positive review - I can't even remember the last time I did so - but that should show you how much I want this novel to be continued.The overall setting is not really unique, but it doesn't have to be, especially when the MC has a very balanced cheat - if you can even call it one, it's just a step up from photographic memory. He's not smarter, or more talented, or able to obtain information others cannot, he's just able to remember anything. And given that magic involves remembering or recreating the nearly-unrememberable, that is a big help, but not earth-shatteringly so, I think.For character design, there's not a lot to say. One point tho, despite first impressions, if you think about it, he's not arrogant, he's just aware of his status and abilities, and acting accordingly. To those who have real abilities, or hold important positions for a good reason (not just "daddy is a government official, so bow down to me"), he treats them with dignity and respect. To cheaters, connivers, backstabbers, and those who've gone mad with perceived power, he shuts them down without hesitation. He somewhat lacks common sense, but that's to be expected from someone with absolutely none of his body's original memories.The story is rather original, with numerous twists I'd never seen before (which is also saying something, to date, I've read literally hundreds, maybe even over a thousand, other novels). Some portions are predictable, but it's hard to avoid that no matter how good an author you are. Plot armor (of the egregious variety) seems to be nonexistent thus far, with the most glaring example being, uh... a bookworm knowing the Collatz Conjecture (3n+1 problem, for those who don't remember it by that name), or maybe a memory-preservation (aka mental stability) cheat having protective effects on his mind? Easy to understand explanations for kinda improbable events can't really be called egregious plot armor, the only luck there is being in a situation where his skills can shine in the first place. Sure, instead of a mental attack they could've just fireballed him, but they wanted to leave no trace for contextually obvious reasons, so mental attacks were the best option by far.Not much else I wanna say, so go read it and let WN know they should continue its translation of this excellent novel.
I have been reading on this app probably since the day it got launched. All I can say, I hardly ever leave any reviews (5 or so in over the years). The novel is extremely interesting in both the character development and their place in the world. Take the time to read it. You won’t be disappointed.
Cliche story with lots on inconsistencies. I dont know if the inconsistencies are due to translation but the novel feels like it was written by a 12 years old child.
From when I started reading to where I am now, I would say that the concept of this story and the development is very good. The only thing holding this down would be that there are a lot of grammatical errors. So much so that I have to spend time trying to figure out what the authors means in some cases. While this takes away from the story, it isnt enough to stop me from reading this book! One advice I would give the author for improvement is obviously learning the english language, as well as trying to deepen the plot of the story! A couple examples I have from other books ive read would be that instead of the main character going through an event and then magically getting the ability to not register pain or care about pain, they make it so that the event is super discriptive and made it so that something happened to where the main character got used to pain. They describe it like, “Suwu felt like his skin was being flayed alive, his muscles being streched around his body, trying to compresses his bones into fine powder! His organs felt like they inflated so much that they were trying to rip apart his body to run away.” That type of discription. Anyway I just wanted to give my opinion because I enjoyed your story and can’t wait for you to devlop as a writer!
I love Rise of Demon God so I'll definitely love this story ✨✨✨✨❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️????????????????❤️????????✨✨✨✨✨
