Not the typical combat novel you'd expect when you see Crazy Lich in the title. But then again he's not your typical MC. Sure he's brilliant and technically evil, but he's funny too and enjoys the small things in life. Add in a power system laced with sarcasm, some truly well developed characters, a thoroughly designed world, some political intrigue and you got the makings of a great story.If you just want to see an evil lich throwing armies of undead minions at it's enemies, this is the wrong novel for you. This story is not a continuous reiteration of stereotypical fight scenes. No, there is actual development and sometimes you even have to think and reflect to make sense of it all.
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Good stories. Have been following it from RR..will be one of the best original novel in this site.. great character development, interesting plot, although sometime quite confusing with all the timelines, but worth the read.. so this review need more than 140 words, hoping that I have write this review more than 140 words.. goddamnit QI..
Really interesting story so far. I like the idea that the mc cultivates on own and discovers new realms while dealing with the estrangement with normal people around him as he is transcending human limits. It also leads to many questions: Why can he cultivate, is there something about him that is special? Are there other beings out there, even humans, that can cultivate as well or is he the only one so far? I hope that those questions will be answered further in the story but for now it gives a certain sense of mystery.
Pancakeswitch got the best stories with great plots.... Here is another of her books. I'm so intrigued to read and join the adventure. A ghost with a system. sound interesting.I recommend to you all, it'll be worth your time.
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: You should have updated people of the possibility of hiatus sooner, then once you saw that you were not likely to come back to this story, sill let them know(this is the thing you did let us know, but you should have told us both). Your story development seems a little lacking, I don't know where to suggest improvements though... I just sensed that you didn't really have a full understanding of what you were writing while I was reading your work, and the part that took the hit was your story developement.Positive Feedback: The character design of the MC is well done, and I can already see some other characters being developed within the first 5 chapters.;,;. good job.;,;. also, I saw that you were clear and defined on the world background and I could tell that you tried hard at making sure the writing quality was good.;,;.Personal Feedback: the overall quality is not what drives me away from this novel in the least, it is two fold... I don't like going past chapter 5 in any novel I can't finish, and I'm not really interested in this story.;,;. Keep up the good work (I hope you come back and finish this novel at some point.;,;.).Score: WQ 5/5 SoU 3/5 SD 4/5 CD 5/5 WB 5/5
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I read this novel and it's slow! And that's not a complain but a very big compliment indeed! I was able to go through every emotion the MC was going through. And the parts where the MC mentions about his love for his lover, they are pure poetry! And element of Sci-fi is just the cheery on top! As the story plays out in year 2050, the history of world counting the ones that author made were something I really liked to read. So far I haven't really found any prominent mistakes. Honestly, I am completely invested in the book and would love to recommend to read it!
Since there is a lack of chapters on which I can comment I have to make due with the present ones.First off, the writing quality is very good. No “obvious“ mistakes and the like. A clear structure with a broad range of descriptions. Easy to read and understand.The introduction is short and precise. No useless babbling about the MC's previous life.The update stability is unclear but we'll see. For now I'll give it 5 stars, since anything else would hinder its path.The story is quite fast paced for the first few chapters but luckily it doesn't seem rushed. Clear and well sorted, the story builds up a sense of intrigue towards the MC.Hand in hand with the story, the character design is, despite being at the start, satisfying. Traits and actions are well presented are catch the characters mood. Later on we will see the extent of the characters potential but the current impression is mostly good.The author avoids long descriptions and babbling, which helps the reading “flow“ and will hopefully stabilies the story. Without all that babbling the story will feel much more “genuine“.The last point. The world background is of course hard to judge since only 6 chapters have been released.We get to know quite a few things in those 6 chapters and I like the fact that they aren't presented in one moment. Often we have some old man the MC meets and suddenly we know everything we need to.The MC knows a lot of things by himself but has to sort them and cannot fully rely on them since they could be wrong or only partially true.He gets some information through some conversation etc. and not a huge amount.I am very interested in where this is going to end up.You have certainly captured my attention.???
Like where this is going. excited about the famous characters that should appear in the future.....
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