this story is a Total gold.. character design is great and everything is just amazing for me... keep it up author ? u have created an awesome story.
I have been reading the comments and there have been a lot of thoughts on this...First of all I would say this novel is good and it keeps your interest till the end,Secondly it is difficult to translate especially from Chinese so well done on trying to do this effort,Lastly I would congratulate this person on doing so and I hope that he would continue improving and may be one day all be in his favourBad comments are easy to find but choosing the right words to encourage someone is a gift to that person which indeed will be returned to you if you are giving the same kind of effort. Words easier said than Actions performed...
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i love the way you wrote this story.it makes me want to keep on reading on and on . keep it up,this dook is a dimond.there is a lot more i want to say but im not good at describing what i think.
This novel has a very interesting setting and quite unique. Instead of transmigrating into a weak body, the MC ends up being one of strongest people in the world. But, even though it is true, don't be fooled by this and think we have some OP MC. Nope. The new identity MC obtained is indeed one of strongest in the world, but he is seriously injured and anybody can probably kill him.And it is difficult for him to recover and it will probably take a veryyyy loooong time. Plus, even if he recovers, the MC did not obtain the previous host's memories and thus can't use any martial arts. Overall, this premise of transmigrating into an OP individual is a total scam and I was disappointed. The only thing MC does throughout the novel is act like he knows it all and schemes with what little brain he has. If you are someone who digs these type of storied, this is for you. I found it boring after some time to be honest.
Well done to the author. Your writing style is different and lovely to read, however it has the potential to reach more readers and admirers. The author adopts an inconsistent approach to grammar and punctuation and would benefit from spacing out their moments of dialogue to provide an even powerful impact.
terrible
one of the most unskilled, weak and pathetic MCs ever written. The protagonist is both stupid and unmotivated. So much for being a gamer. Did I mention that she also mastered the Dao of whining and complaining about everything? Might as well kys at the rate ur going. Where is the antisocial sociopath who will treat lives like grass and ascend levels like the child of destiny?!?!
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This is definitely the best work I have ever written your support, I truly believe that with enough I can make it great, Seriously bleive when i say this will never be dropped until we all die...don't hold me to that i have a.d.d
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I thought I was on last week's trial read, this is just sad .................................................................................