The mc is evil I don’t know anymore cause author makes it so confusing that the mc is sometimes acts like wimp and sometimes smart, it annoying to read. Shame it has lot of potential especially the background story.
This story is really really bad. The plot cannot be maintained, not just between chapters but even between sentences. The characters are all one one dimensional but the protagonist is in a league of their own, a rare caricature of everything wrong with some Chinese protagonists.Also it should have ‘magical apocalypse’, ‘cultivation’ and ‘system cheat’ tags.
As of around 20 chapters in, I am really enjoying it. The starting concept confused me a bit, but once the story got into the meat, it greatly improved. I really like the concept so far, and I am excited to see where it goes.
Quality: High quality. No major errors that could affect the flow of the story.Update: The author is doing a great job on this. Commendable. .Story: Right from the introduction, the novel progresses without deviating from the main plot. Characters: Well designed and thought out. Especially the MC. World: The setting of the world is very good. The author's virtual world designs were on point. Characters, ways of life etc. Overall: A great novel.
Fluffy rom-com with transmigrated MC into a magical world. If you're looking for a mofu mofu novel and tofu eaten by ML, this is your cup of tea! ???
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I like reading this... the only problem I have is the spelling errors and the wrong pronouns used to describe the genders at times, he became she and etc. But I like where this story is going! Please update soon! ???
Nice story. I'm really getting addicted. Need more chapters
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The interesting premise it started with got me reading. Maddox gave me a feeling of being laid back and I am looking forward to seeing how his character develops. Minimal grammar mistake. But doesn't affect the story flow. With 4 chapters, I can't wait for more updates. Keep going author!
its not all that bad but for me it slowphase sucks i dont like love seperation thingy and system is so useless might aswell dont have concept and idea is awesome but plot progression is bad 11 chapters in gave up there might be peaple liking this book
I will try to read and respond to most of your comments and queries. Please be kind to me as this is my first time and I want my readers to enjoy this book to the fullest. So please feel free to give any ideas or suggestions as to how i should carry on the story.