Raoking
I wonder if the author can share the raw, this novel is good and it is my favorite kind of novel about cultivation with a twist of modernism.
it was written well. not the usual bloat in this kind of genre. off course it was unoriginal but 80 percent of these genre share almost the same plot. well written but unfinished.
everything about the novel is great except I don't see a lot of romance doesn't he have charm there are plenty of novels out there but people lose interest when finding out there's no female characters interested in the protagonist
quite comical, a pretty fun story from a great perspective, not the usual angst team novel but a good fun time, my only complaint would be that there are too many stat panel spreads
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I enjoy the unique twist on the reincarnation genre that this novel does. The MC reincarnates as a white lotus and I find the evolution ability she has to be very interesting. Unlike many reincarnation novels, the main character reincarnates to a time after her death. I find that most reincarnation-revenge story brings the MC to a point before they had died and they use their past life (now future) knowledge to accomplish their revenge. What I like about this novel is that the MC does not know who her real enemy is exactly nor does she know their motive. This creates a sense of mystery that makes me wish the author can do a mass release. It is truly a shame that the author is human with a real life and things to do and not a robot.
Love the story and the main character. Few writing mistakes here and there but overall pretty good. The flow of the story seems to be at a good pace to me with a enough story building and action mixed in well.
Amazing!!??? Just can't wait for next update!! It is just amazing and fantastic story line with lots drama and emotions flowing in it.. it just makes one so mesmerized with the story that it makes you feel as u are the protagonist and the story revolves around u.. I request the writer to have mass release for next few updates. Just loved it ???
I like the overall concept of this novel; I have never seen it before. The characters so far are pretty well-built, and the world is good. There is redundancy at times and some grammar and punctuation mistakes. But, I looked further into the novel, and it seems the author has fixed most of these issues.
I'm enjoying the story, I hope u can update soon, noticing it's been a year since the last. Looking forward to the next chapter???????
I really like this story. Although its a generic and not original concept the author pulls it of really well. He actually develops the MC's family like his dads love of chess, there are so many stories where the parents aren't built on and many where they are killed off with the fact they died contributing nothing to plot. I really like the MC's personality and how he actually questions if the changes made to the world actually makes sense unlike some MC's that roll with it for no reason. Although at some points he acts stupid even though he's practically pushed all his stat points into intelligence he acts smart a lot of the time as well. All in all, I really like this story and want to see what it becomes in the future
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