This novel is terrible. The mc just contradicts himself and says he is seeking for power but he can’t even see it right in front of his eyes. Book had potential but sadly not.
This is really enjoyable its like discovery channel snake with a system....................................................keep em coming.
I love it! By the end of the second chapter I had my first hypothesis nulled hahaha. so I'm excited to know more about them. More chapters please. Highly recommend! At first I was quite dubious in reading this novel because of the theme. As I am writing fluffy romance I tend to stay away from dark (gory) themes because it tends to rub on me, but hey, this one's goooood!!! The murder was just stated in passing (not graphic) so I'm fine haha. and it makes me think like a detective. really love it. I'll be watching this novel for updates.
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The very first thing that I noticed when I started to read this were the many grammatical errors. Normally if it's just a few, I wouldn't mind. However, there are enough errors that I had a hard time staying focused on the story itself. The grammar could use quite a bit of improvement. With that said... I do like the Author's creativity with the story. It's definitely something I'm not used to reading, but I would still encourage new readers to give the story a shot.
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