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This fanfic is awesome!!! But please don'tlet kanzaki steal nagisa!! my dear kayano will cry!waiting for the next chapter! This is super amazing><
Do not remember if I leave my review on this novel. well, this is one of my favorite novels and the author is doing a great job with the rewrite, I hope a lot of people support him, because he deserves it. Thank you and keep writing
I actually love this book everything about it is great except the translation quality which became poor after some time
great start .....!, no comedy element yet .. have to see .. hope he gets harder options in future.. harem come on .. more monster girls n...
Good read, good luck to the author!Release a new chapter soon, I wonder how Long Gia Hinh will defeat the demon king!The more I read, the more I was drawn into the story because I love the horror genre!
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
your story line is somewhat ok but the translation, grammar, English is terrible so much so that one cannot know what the story line is about. please improve on the English translation
So I do like it, but honestly I just don't understand what is happening, maybe I didn't pay attention but I'm around chapter 35 and I've completely lost track of what's happening
This novel is pretty good, I haven’t found many problems.
The flow and writing style is pretty amazing, I am not really a fan of female lead books.
But for my friend I’ll read it.
Keep up the good work ?
Well, that took a dark turn quick... I thought this is a comedy at first until the MC went to Minecraft. The story feels realistic even though it is set in a game. Props to this author for making this series!
I absolutely love this story. All the characters are extremely fleshed out, and the story is written really well. The theme of teamwork is threaded perfectly. The character development is insane. The last reason is a bit more personal and that's that I really connect with the character because I'm mixed, black and Latino, and have went through some of the things that they have gone through.
Warning!!!!!this novel is a fcking lie.why u may ask? ive read till chp 40 and then when i proceed to go to read the mtl in mtlnovel*com and just about to read, i accidently read the comment and from what i see..... well let say its not looking pretty good.this novel start as a true misunderstanding novel till the author changed script and abruptly make the sect mc joins into a real hidden and all powerful sect.the author abruptly change the sect leader into a real mahayana realm cultivator and all the 7 disciples into (real)high realm cultivators.if the sect is truly an expert sect would the sect master be frugal and so poor? will he sell all his possessions and mc painting for money if they r truly expert sects? would they even fear not paying the inferior spirit stones at the early chp?i quote from the readers comment " this novel is disapointing. you can fool the characters, but don't you try fool the readers. Turns out they aren't pretending to be experts ,but real experts from the start."I'll also post a screen shot from a commenter in the web .like this review so it can rise to top review to let many people know
