mysticdark100
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
In this story of young man HuaBaiYing, who become Crown Prince concubine for his sister who runs away, the rumors said the crown prince is super ugly and pervert who already have three concubines in his side, but the thing is now simple as its sounds, you think the Crown prince is an idiot or what? hi Guys, please help to support my new novel for Webnovel, I'm joining the competition, I'm challenging my self to learn how to join in such a big competition with so many things to learn, still sooooo far to go, but everybody needs a little challenging in their life to be better, even if it does not succeed but the process makes us learn a lot.
I love it. Glad i found this novel, i cant wait to catch up with the book. Im on chapter 53 right now. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
I really like it!It's a shame though that it only has 315 translated chapters and there are over 1000 out in china.Apparently this got dropped by the translator. I would not recommend you start reading this because there is a high likelyhood that this will never get finished :( You will feel empty to stop reading this great story after you reached the 1/4 that is translated.
This one is SANSATION and SANS approves
Nice, please be selected I cant wait for more.
very interesting
is this ever going to be updated
The narration style gives me vibes of an African woman narrating a legend to her kids or grandkids and I love it. it feels rushed but if this is maintained throughout the novel it can be a good and innovative as well as bold narration style. Great book.Only issue would be punctuation.the commas are excessive. maybe watch a YouTube video on how to use commas and full stop. There. A 5 star book will be born.
Great start to an interesting story! I love the female lead and how strong she is. The chemistry kept me reading! Can't wait for more chapters to drop!
A great novel that was given up on too early. It seemed like the author listened to readers comments a bit too much and went back and rewrote chapters which changed future paths he had already visualized. While it's good to learn from mistakes and try to make fans happy, don't ever let them change your novel midway through. This will change the way the author writes the rest of the novel even if it's subconsciously, which in this case seemed to wilt his enthusiasm for this one, which ended up causing it to get dropped suddenly. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy White Online, but my personal opinion and a few of my buddies who've read both agree that Martial Arts Master was overall a better read and had even greater potential if it wasn't dropped. I hope that someday in the future the author either continues on, or rewrites the novel and does what he imagines without other's changing his views. Either way, I'm enjoying the reread I'm doing.
Currently at chapter 27. This is a classic cliche Chinese novel, but it's still better than most of the other ones, you feel me? It's a good read if you want to read something if there is nothing other, you feel me? The translation is quite decent, compared to other Chinese ones, you feel me? Updates: Idk, just started reading it recently. Characters and World: Nothing, technically nothing...(My native language is not English, and I'm not writing reviews often, so I know, I'm sloppy.)
