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man this was a disappointment. I had high hopes this would be good, but man was a wrong. MC is fucking weird and not in a good way. the author forgets what he said 1 chapter before. One chapter he said The MC had good grades and the next, his grades sucked. Its so dam slow and boring, and every chapter feels like filler. Your just waiting around for something fun to happen, but it never does.
Lots of racism. Lots of racism. Lots of racism. Lots of racism. Lots of racism. Lots of racism. Lots of racism. Lots of racism. Lots of racism. Lots of racism. Lots of racism. Lots of racism. Lots of racism. Lots of racism. Lots of racism. Lots of racism.
The only good things about this novel are the translation and the system. Other than are nothing but just a trash. Protagonist is ABSOLUTELY useless and idiot without the System, only know how show-off, almost never use his brain.
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Best historical novel here! This story deserves to be number 1 in the historical category. The plot is very engaging and there are always surprises to look forward. MC is cool, (just take out him sometimes being dominated by his wives), witty and not very OP because the autho----the world is against him being a balance breaker. XDAND I LOVE JIA XU! Maybe my review now sounds nonsensical but I can't stop myself from adding this part haha.
A really enjoyable story as i kinda got into army building/kingdom building novels i can say this novel is a really good one ... there are some problems tho ...1.The author sometimes forgets his vocabulary and writes sentences that make no sense well it doesnt matter alot cause you can understand what they are trying to say in the next sentence hope there is some improvement there :) ...2. World building is great but i would like a chapter specifically for information about the world (kinda trivial but necessary) slow development is also needed since our main character will need to fight enemies like his own blood so yeah that ofc isn't accurate since the story just started 3.Characters design is great the personalities fit them i would like more dialogue with the wolves i'm sure we will see that in the next chapters 4. The story is progressing at the right speed not too fast not too slow i think the author should keep this pace and accelerate or decelerate when need like a fight or a major event really good job there .... Review score 4.5/5 the only other complain i have is the chapters frequency ... can you please release 20 chapter per week XD .Overall the vocabulary needs a little fixing also for those who think artemis name isn't pronounce with artemisa and is artemis well who cares artemis is in english and greek artemisa is in spanish :) hope this solved your hesitation to read the novel...Good reading ...** Author keep up the good work hope you werent offended by the joke above ..!
Like fresh snow this story makes me just want to cuddle under my blanket and read. Amazingly written and takes me on an adventure that I can only say .. wow what an imzgination.Well done Author. Please dont stop writing. You have inspired my mind with your story
I am a big fan of alchemy novels and it's are to find a good one anymore... everything feels the same... with this book I felt like this genre had hope again...a well written book as of chapter 23... Worth some of my very precious power stones!
what can I saw but looking the sophisticated boss line!
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the first chapter is so good I can't wait to read the rest
Fantastic book. Cassandra M has outdone herself. What adventures that she lead us in. Feeling we know the characters like family. YOU will not regret reading, The Beta & I!!!
