Author stop trying to add the need to be ethical in the MC's personality, we're not children,we understand that humans are selfish and are driven by ambition,cause at this point it's almost as tho you try label everyone the MC goes up against as 'evil',no is evil,people just have conflicting interests,other than this there's not much to complain about,keep up the good work?
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Please stop using resistance as a stat. Resistance is something you overcome using stamina. It's a great story but every time I see that I want to pound my head against the wall in frustration.
I am still planning to read this novel soon but the first impression when i tried to read this.Its daam paking PG!? The heck are people thinking that 9 year olds are reading this very moment (probably) they stumble across reading some novels though i am not trying to be offensive to anyone but this is just waaaay to funny. Kids these day are usually playing MC, Fortnite and some other games. Its just on my opinion that its waaaay to rare to find a kid reading something with no pictures only in the front page in the series and my purpose in writing something like this is nothing... Just continue and read the novel and give some stones to the author and translator for their good work and y'all have a good day XD
This is the 1st competitive sport book I've read, and I assure you it's the best! You should really try it out! 5 stars! Why not?
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The story is well written the author seems to know where he/she is taking it, characters are likable,Concerned for his battle prowess,I enjoyed various things but at the same time wish for a bit of crisis or something a bit more exciting than normal,Hope for more chapters as I want more of this ??
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my honest opinion i got to say the plot was good until up to part where you really dumb down the mc and cause the major issue to your plot and you know what I am talking about. please don't do that again just to add drama because you will garbage you novel even more. you put all these warnings just to be wasted because you made the mc 0 iq because the power of family. I just wanna say please improve your plot without the unnecessary stuff and I will improve the rating. I got a lot to say, but I am just going to say dont destroy your novel unless your rewrite your mess.
Mc is one hell of a crazy guy. He’s not hesitated at all when he committed suicide (meaning, it may trigger some readers, so please consider this aspect of novel before reading - just because Mc can disregard his own life does not means the other should follow his example).The author really creative when he utilize Mc’s power, cause Mc to be able to do something similar to teleport. This guy is also crazy enough to kill himself so many times to gain point or grid skills. (Well, consider his past life, it is to be expected for Mc to be a bit of a bonker). Any future plans to created a bunker in the apocalypse are quite promising, but sadly because of the disappearance of the author, we are unable to see it come to fruition.
I really like this story, I recommend to read it.It’s really entertaining and it would fit to read if you like gray/ slightly dark harry and if you like when the main character actually is smart and doesn’t only have two brain cells.It would have gotten 5/5 if the author could update, I haven’t read the original so I don’t know if it’s dropped or just on hold for a long time...Each chapter have a good content and it have a lot of words, so even if there’s only 14 (I don’t remember the amount of chapters) chapters it will be like reading a novel/fic that have around ~20 chapters //Your Average Book Addicted