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I swear to Cthulu, this is a literary masterpiece. Here are some other words to make up the requirement to post a review. Penis. Tenticle penis. Big penis. Bumpy penis. Horse sized penis. Long penis. Thick penis. Purple penis.
This is a great book. I've read until chapter 7 and I love every part of it. The only issue that I've had is the whole 'info dump'. It's been sort of frustrating to read through all of this information in a span of only a few chapters and it's also demotivating. My advice for the author is to try to spread out all of the information so it's easier for readers to absorb the information. But, this is also a difficult skill to use as, in my opinion, it requires experience. Other than that, I've enjoyed the book.
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Another crappy novel words are missing here and there in chapters, Over Glorified mc that talks crap to everyone he fights, author stating mc has never retreated from a fight in his entire life of gaming etc and never will here later on mc says he could retreat but doesn't have to, so mc already had a thought process of retreating, also author says at certain power lvl injuries that aren't at the lvl of severed limbs can heal in seconds next chapter a few broken ribs and a crushed hand will take days when chapter before his arm was almost severed healed in seconds etc crap novel
Not trying to criticize too much just that sometimes you'd use past tense then present tense. It's a tad off-putting sometimes so just hoping you'd be able to sync it in future chapters. Thanks. Example Ch1 "when he saw who the woman was he knows he can't ignore it this time"
This work is made by The Plagiarist, the author who has to date only copied other works premise and made it better. This novel was inspired by Lord of the Mysteries. It does have a system and I get hints of Way of the Devil or Mystical Journey vibes for the cheat. Let’s just be real here, it’s by The Plagiarist. It will be good, quit wasting your time here and start spending $$$ to get it releases quicker.
Story was good until it turned into the typical mc who only saves girls and get angry over his own people trying to kill a girl that would have killed all of them if she have the power. Overalll you will just keep getting angry reading this. It’s a good novel but I won’t recommend it
There are parts of the story that are well thought out and have a unique take on the cultivation shstem that differs from other stories. And i have no issue with them being able to fight stronger people, but at times it they can utterly destroy someone nearing the peak of a realm, but then a few days later absolutely struggle to fight someone at the same power. I haven’t read with the updates, as in keeping up with chapter releases. But reading through at once, it feels like the story is rushed and isn’t fully developed. A lot of things aren’t really explained or given background. It also seems that over 80% of females in this story look absolutely the same except hair/eye color.I know this sounds like i despise the story, but i truly don’t. I think the setting and the story itself are good, but a lot of potential is missed out on and lack of variety/creativity in characters. i.e. busty women with big butt… literally all of them and given the same body description.
A riveting work of art from this author, the plot, character development, storyline and setting is just superb. The work of a genius
I'm 20 chapters from finishing the raw material, so I can probably give a solid opinion. Summing up an interesting start to a subsequent tedious development, this flaw is very similar to novels of the same type, such as "48 hours a day