Siegfried chuckled slightly at the skepticism of his descendant. It was good to be skeptical. After all, if Jason simply took this power without hesitation it would look like he was a bit of an idiot.
Finally i get me some ramen..
We started our match. I focused really hard and planning moves one step ahead but Mia-san still won. She was a quick and efficient thinker, which I found really hot. We played game after game, but no matter what, I was always humiliated.
He quickly took a step back and closed the door again. „Boys, you didn't tell me that you were accompanied by this young lady. Now get ready. It's already dawn"
"Then, why are you staying with me? I believe your family house should be at Ironforge, right?"
He saw what seemed to be mahogany furniture around the room— several tables and chairs, the bookshelves, and even the door.
Oblivious to Arata's sentiments, Yukari squinted her eyes and loomed her face towards the other guy's. "That's really suspicious. How would I know if you're not faking it, huh? Like just coming here in hopes to see Attei Attori?"
" As you know many of our brothers and sisters have been discriminated over the years and while kidnappings have been an occurrence, there's been a startling incline in the recent months. Most are quick to blame lawless bandits, but I think we're dealing with something greater."Adam turned around to face the world map."There have been several spots where Grimm have completely avoided trespassing, however all of our scouts that we've sent haven't returned. I'm convinced that you realize how troublesome that is."
the story line is good but fewer chapters and chapters upload very less?
hey you have an awesome story here okay well lot of p*** but who cares LOL you do have a good story I love it sometimes it can get a little drug out but for the most part you keep it going and I heard a comment of yours a few episodes ago how people treat you different because of what you've chosen in life don't worry about them don't worry about the haters okay you are who you are love who you are forget what other people are saying cuz it doesn't matter all that matters is what you think of yourself never forget that you're an awesome writer I can tell by your writing you're a good person don't worry about all the other b******* that's all you be you whoever accept you for who you are it's all good f*** the rest
I started to read because I liked the genres in the tag only to be disappointed with an unreadable google translated story from god knows where. If you are not going to fix errors don’t bother posting it. Don’t know how or why people are reading this puzzle of words called chapters. I usually try and stay positive and read what’s free but translating it made me frustrated
Read up to 800+ chapter. Story started off very interesting. MC opening dungeon shop with real monster he captured from different world that he could visit. As time goes on he gain more subordinate and his shop became more famous. At least until chapter 500+.After that the story seems to slow down massively. One of the story arc took around 100 chapter which solely focus on 1 battlefield being described by multiple character. It felt too padded.One of my issue with this novel is the writing on the action portion. Author done a good job writing about the business part but the action part is lacking. There is a severe lack of tension during the fight especially in the later part of the novel. I don't know why author felt it was necessary to insert jokes during the fight, multiple times, in almost every fighting part of the novel. It is really out of place, ruin the tension and break the immersion during reading.My last problem is with the characters, especially the MC. He really doesn't have much development even after so long. There is event where he seemed to experience character growth, and then he returned to how he is before. After some time the "growth event" occur again, and he still the same. This happen at least 3 times and changes are barely noticeable. The same can be said for his subordinate, they have no character development at all. The one with most development in character and story seemed to be his customer.Overall the story started off good until around chapter 500. It did not turn bad, just dull and boring.