"For his wishes, he asked for the battle experience of Madara Uchiha, a unique "Demon Eyes" blue Sharingan blending with Hozuki DNA, Lava Style, waterbending akin to Avatar, Magnet Style, and talent equivalent to Madara."??????????????????????????????????
So far, I am liking this story!(new reader)? 10/10 low key hoping no major cliffhangers happen...(don't mind me)... Kinda just actually wanted to write a review? it's all good in my book ?anyways! adios! I was never here!!?
Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be
You don't want to miss this!! Excellent character development, captivating arch and a story that will push you to the edge of your seat. Runnn!
I've read the first chapter and I am getting some serious solo leveling vibes, I mean he is about to die and then like KABLAMO wanna be a fucking player.
author the story is very good world background and character design are good too.but your is writing is too complex
Great beginning! Can’t wait for more chapters!
Good Novel to read but a bit short right now. Hope the release will be a bit more maybe. Overall only a 4 Star right now because it is a bit too early to be rated
so I'm only on chapter 50 while I write this, I will update later when I read more. so I notice a lot of grammar errors. by that I mean use of the wrong word for example the word taste is never used it's always test and she/he are wrong once and a while. it's not a big deal you know what the author is trying to say. the story is very slice of life at the moment. mostly revolving around the fmc and how she believes every male around her to be an idiot. the male mc doesn't get a whole lot of screen time but when he does he just feels like a push over and I haven't seen a lot of character development with him. it has being mentioned that other people see the emotional struggles he shows but nobody really does anything to help. they just kinda say "oh this other person will help" or at least that's how it feels to me finally I think my review sounded mostly negative but I do think this can be a great novel once the characters grow a little bit. I see a lot of potential in it and I fully believe the author can make that happen.
Good the mc is not hypocrite right now as he just being true like his old life being shameless and not trying to trick to get in the robes
Ok. Grammar and general writing skills not great. Dialogue and characters need a lot of work. Good start for author, defenatly lots of potential, this just isn’t there yet. Characters are empty without any traits or quirks.
The story seems very interesting and it has alot of potential.If the story hasn't really started so am pretty hyped too see how he is going to write it.