1. Writing quality is bearable.2. Story development is very forced. Every passive skills become useful with no setup in the next sentence. He would be peaceful for 3 months, gain a battle skill, and a conflict will arrise out of nowhere in the next sentence.3. The MC is dumb. Sometimes having a dumb MC can be fun in a comedy. The problem is that this story tries to be dark. This makes the MC just frustrating. The only reason he can survive even a single day is that he got lucky and has a system. Worst of all, the MC is arrogant and thinks that he is smart while making the dumbest actions and statements.4. Not sure about stability so I gave it a 3 as a middle value.5. The background is terrible. The sect makes no sense and the rules the author introduces gets broken in the next. He does try to think of a "fresh" twist to a sect so I give 2 stars for effort. The problem is that some archetypes are there for a reason. Sometimes that is just an inevitable outcome of logical progression. An example of this would be greedy and selfish people always being in power as the antagonist. This is inevitable when only those that are greefy and selfish can climb over others to gain the wealth and power they have. Once you try to subvert expectations and break archetypes, it instead just breaks logic. So good attempt but poor execution.Overall it was a poorly executed story with an interesting premise. I would not recommend.
The novel is good. Alas, Webnovel's evil has been growing! Behold, a trial read with only 15 chapters! Terrible!
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Review: Chapter 58This story is excellent. Though it may have similarities to "My Vampire System
At chapter 70 and I have very mixed feelings about this novel. First off, it has a lot of potential and so far, it's pretty good tbh. As for why I have mixed feelings; pretty much entirely because of how the MC is portrayed.. It seems the author has fumbled slightly when making a manipulative MC. The MCs intelligence can only be considered above average while everyone else is just stupid. Second issue, the MC is very arrogant. I will say, I 100% am for an arrogant MC...but they MUST be charismatic and strong to back that up (example: Ren from TAPOV). Orien is just cocky and annoying at points. I will say, he is getting development, but he needs A LOT at this point to be a good MC. I will keep reading because, as I said, it has a lot of potential.
The plot is very predictable. mc says only power is important in this world, but he himself is stupid, naive, does not build logic. He should use his brain and not make unnecessary enemies, but he acts without thinking. The system is in the hands of the wrong person again :D
Very good, but there are two negative points that made me give it 4 stars, first the appearance of the MC, generic super beauty appearance, long black hair, jade skin, super handsome that attracts everyone and blablabla literally the same appearance as 99% of the protagonist of works of cultivation which takes all the grace out of an MC that wanted to be common, the second negative point is that the author simply destroyed the cultivation system, MC in the golden core but kills people with 3 or 4 great realms stronger, or be who cares about MC's cultivation ? he kills everyone being weaker so all the cultivation part was killed by the author but the rest is good, 4 stars
I am so very tiring of reading the works of authors who abandons their readers by not finishing their work. NOTE TO WEBNOVEL: A work is not "COMPLETED" JUST BECAUSE AN AUTHOR STOPS SUBMITTING NEW CHAPTERS. pLEASE ADD A NEW CATEGORY "abandoned" TO WARN READERS.
WARNING: Reading this story might make your little brother grow 2 inches longer. Read it at your own risk....EXTREMELY SEXUAL...Don't read this in public places
The start was not that bad honestly. translation quality wise there are some errors there and there but it is still readable.I can honestly also get behind that the main female is brain dead and falls deep in love with MC for absolutely no reason nor prior contact or before even having spoken a single word to him.However it went downhill when the author keeps forcing that random stone gambling garbage story line there. I am 100% thinking it should not even be a thing.Not only does he keep selecting trash stones each time but the reason he does so is not even properly explained, just half assessed excuses like, does not want to show off.I honeslty hate this type of stuff so much he is actively hiding his skill for no reason at all since we had seen no real consequences, like i wouldn’t mind he did as he is doing now if there are actual consequences shown but there isn’t, because there is a guy clearly known for picking right stones most of the time our of 10 and MC decides he needs to hide his skill and picks 2 with 8 empty stones.It’s honestly the whole story each time, he could have so much benefits showing off his skills but he doesn’t, every encounter there exists for the sole reason of trash talking MC before even knowing, the brain level of villains in this novel is simply in a word : abysmal.I’d rather honestly read about a MC that fights and figure out his own benefits first for doing this or that than one actively hiding his skill and crippling his ability in doing so and again for seemingly no proper reason given.
Interesting take on the whole gender bender genre. I wonder if he/she would be surprised when she/he gets out of the game. I would like to read more so please don't give up, the book really has my attention. I just wish you could have posted this book/ come up with the idea of this book sooner so I could enjoy it years earlier. If you continue with writing this book it will be a good hit with the vr/gender bender/ god/goddess/higher power genre and, if what I am reading is right then maybe a calamity or apocalypse or a alien/monster/demon war/world takeover/anailation. So please keep up the good work author!!!
This one is creatively done. It is obvious that the author put their love and care to this. It wasn’t laugh out loud funny and I noticed the author was trying their best to make up jokes, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. I like all the characters for the time being, they have this real aura attached to them, the novel is a Slice of Life after all and I expected them to be that way. SoL is my cup of tea but I can’t speak for everyone. Keep it up, I’ll be waiting for more.