Oh no poor Xiao Yuan... hope he will survive there qwq
gotta say, this was a surprise.
I didn't expect to enjoy it as much as I did.
Great character progression, there's not a lot we've seen of the world yet. Not much world building has been done and not many side characters have been introduced so far, but this has a lot of potential.
Give it a read!!
Chapter 141 here The novel is overall good, the pacing is somewhat slow but bearable. I gave this novel 5 stars because I'm biased to Sci Fi novel but also it's possibilities to be one of those novels in top 10 ranks.The only thing bad here is the fillers and the irrelevant chapters in the story aside from giving the MC it's characteristics it's nothing aside from having it somewhat connection to the current story. What takes this novel from taking off the charts from other novel is the MC "INDEPENDENCE". it's not like other novels where MC learn from academy or other sect he participated from but becoming an apprentice to one individual under a brand name. Spoon feeding MC resources and gears takes away the novelty of Appreciation and Fulfillment. Unlike the Mech Touch even though it's expansive chapters, the novel pace and situation is a "Meh" for me. I'll even read the long chapter/fillers of mech touch explaining how he makes the machine works in special way than to his peers. How taxing and hard to start his own Company without help from outside. How unfavorable the situation is despite taking deals that only have short term benefits. it's way better when things progress in his direction. The fulfillment of seeing the creation bearing fruit is front of your eyes is hard to describe. To tell you the truth I skip and skim some the chapters (141) I read in your novel. like the in depth interaction of Vanessa and MC and the conversation of Mary and MC. So far I'm a little disappointed, his main class is mechanic but we only see him do repairs, learning (I don't what ge is learning aside from bits of information). One creation process but still spoonfed him. I don't feel any exciting feeling when reading Sci Fi novels. I think the biggest flaw here is "MC really doesn't have anything that his, he didn't create something special only for him" he don't have "Independence, to explore and experience and innovate his creation" that's why the legendary mechanic is good since he is independent entity and mech touch top tier since MC walking his own path of mech designer. Your MC is still doesn't have an identity aside from seeing his main class is mechanic. MC I feel still not mechanic in my eyes.
The thing is I don’t understand how in a place filled with magic a mother could die of childbirth. Truth be told when I first started reading this novel I thought it was a normal medieval theme novel so I didn’t think much of a mother dying of childbirth, but as the story keeps going on the grandma started showing magical means and medical pills etc. I find it hard to believe that the grandma fails to prepare to bring pill and magical medicine for her precious daughter in case things go wrong with the childbirth. And we still haven’t gotten a reasonable explanation about this topic. For this major plot hole this novel is a major failure.
I like the development of the story I wish you the best bro i hope you can keep continuing to write this great story
This novel is... Not great. The grammar Is so painfully bad that I can’t actually read anymore. Mistakes here and there are fine, but literally every sentence takes me out of it. Please if you write a book at least use grammarly or something. Also the writing has been... bad. Often times the author skips foreshadowing and straight up says “something is going to happen” before it happens and without foreshadowing. Its absolutely frustrating.
It was a very good read. The writing style is superb. The character development is if not the best, it is one of the best. The best thing in this novel is the interaction between Sam and Levi. Their kind of romance is exactly just what I am looking for.
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Webnovel doesn't understand that it has become monotonous and boring. but these novels still keep coming, i reckon there is no quality control on webnovel
I very much enjoy this story so far but I’m wondering will he always be super inferior or that kinda what I get the feel from him or will he have something happen to him that makes him super good. All I see for him the the foreseeable future is him falling way behind?
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Really a good concept with reincarnating as a leech, pretty good ideas, and world creation, this work can turn out to be something great. Way to go author.