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Finally, I am leaving myself a shameless author review!SBTRK is a slow-burn romance with lots of political intrigue in a world rife with magic and mythical beasts. There are schemes, fights, squabbles, and an overarching adventure mystery that will unfold with time. Details are scattered everywhere, so do keep a lookout for them! Atticus and Daphne's romance will also start in a rather unorthodox manner. However, things will eventually evolve for them and it will become obvious that not everything is separated into black and white, but rather, the infinite shades of gray in between.Come join the family and set off with me on this journey. I hope you will enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it!
I really wanted to like this novel but honestly i just can't tragedy genre just ain't for me i guess. everything that can go wrong does all the time. in all honesty this novel feels depressing and i don't mean depressing at times I mean overall there's constant air of depression that just never goes away ever. also a few just just absolutely revolting things happen as well but you can over look those.the power system while admittedly unique kinda just feels weird and clunky.the MC, hmmm idk how to peg him to be honest but if you're familiar with the authors work and writing style then he shouldn't be very much different.other characters are pretty decently fleshed out to be honest some of the specters are a bit more interesting as characters.overall if you're into tragedy and that kinda stuff give it a read, if you're not don't touch this with a 10 foot pole.
lack cheat or system tag. mc got book who essentially just speaking tangible system.
I like the story it's very unique itself focusing at a love story of how love is felt by A. I at the future. I also like the way on how you persistently produce chapters Looking forward for more chapters, Greetings from New Zealand
Writing quality is alright Updating stability is great!Story development is very ehh the novel goes way to fast and I don’t mean in terms of chapter I mean in the time frame the novel is set on The first week he manages to do way to much. It should have taken him atleast a few months Ex: Charlotte and MC relationship turns romantic in the same day they met that isn’t realstic it should have been spread through atleast 1 month in novel time so the relationships can develop In a week he managed to befriend the daughter of the USA President conquer a sword trail get a power that isn’t from this universe, survive a elevator malfunction and fought a monster I feel the time frame is just in unrealsticAnother issue is his attempt to get the instructor to teach him, him apparently being the lord and then getting caught but he somehow gets away from it cause of a misunderstanding that doesn’t make sense anybody would know he was lying Character design is alright world background hasn’t been explored that much
This is my first review, so here we go. I really like the idea of the story, but there are quite a few grammatical mistakes. I advise you to rewrite the chapters because your book has a lot of potential. By the way, the character of Thomas is quite annoying, literally, so I'd really like to see him eliminated or help find a new body for charles to get in upcoming chapters.p.s this review is purely based on the first few chapter
I love the cover page. Very original and catchy. Great synopsis. Thoughtful, short and encouraging to read.I am not a fan of fantasy, but I read (for the moment just a few chapters) your story with pleasure ;) You can definitely write! :) A nod to your imagination and creativity. You've successfully created a different reality. The plot is captivating!I wish I could have more free time to follow all the novels I started to read ;)
I expected nothing when I started reading this but dang, this is great. I’ll give a brief review of the plot, please be warned that there would be light spoilers ahead.-The power system is Dao-heavy themed but the world is set on Post-apocalyptic Earth where ‘Mara’ runs rampant and the Qi & Heavenly Dao are polluted hence practioners have high chance of losing control-- mutation or going insane. MC crossed over to this world and woke up in an underground basement where there are only children of the same range of age as him aside from Professor Zhang-- who told them they are the “last of humanity” (these just screams Promised Neverland lol). And before MC woke up on this world, he received a system where he cultivates through being lazy.---Personal thoughts:Great plot, Good writing. A well-done combination of Cultivation and Post Apocalypse. Humorous. PETS. Moderate to Fast Paced. No harem. No faceslaps. No Arrogant Villain Characters. Recommended.> Author really did a great job writing this, it’s not bland at all. The story as a whole is light and humorous but sometimes there will be a dark, heavy feel and tënsion going on. > The world setting has a mystery surrounding it where in some chapters you’d noticed subtle hints about it. Also, it’s not an info dump. Author minced them apart, fed them to the readers in different chapters so you’ll get time to digest them and also retained a bit of mysterious effect.> The cultivation system, although a bit common but there are also unique points in it-- the terms used, cultivation techniques and rules PLUS the losing control part. IN WHICH the latter really really reminded me of Lord of the Mysteries hahaha. > System. The system also have its restrictions so it did not necessarily made him overpowered where he could facesmack everyone but just enough so he could survive and be labeled as ‘genius’. > Characters. Interaction between them may seem forced at first but it will flow smoothly and naturally later on. MC’s partners and their interactions are the comic relief of this series lol.> Great plus for cats and dogs!!! <3The only complaint I have is sometimes it’s just too fast paced and the MC. MC is sometimes dumb and sometimes smart. Make up your mind author! Lol. But overall, this is great great great.Review from c39.
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