Hi dear readers, author here. I have waited a little while until I made my own review. I tried writing another modern novel with some angst and heart breaks. I am planning to make this story short but full of roller coaster of emotions.I hope you will like this. Have a good time reading.
Amazing story nice and cute character. Somewhat funny, emotional, little bit mysterious.
An amazing read ?, the character ,plot twist.. everything is beautiful
Great start of the story and I hope for more chapters ?
When I say read it .I mean it?. The setting, the characters. Gosh this is a pass?
Hey bro, remember me? Anyway, this is a genuine review. I have read a few chapters I am in 5 or 6 but I want to read more. Really! I am not lying! This is good! However... It's not great. Yeah... its not a novel that will come in no.1. So, you have to work hard. But I must say this novel is wayy better than mine. You write better than me.. Just keep writing.. Don't Give Up. Pleaseee! I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO ALL OF YOU. I am jealous of you. You write so well. You write wayyyy better than me. There wasn't any long and boring info dumps like my novel. The MC seems genuine and well written. Still, you can never become too good. So I will give you some tips that might help you : 1. Read top novels in WebNovel (top 5) 2. Read real best selling novels like Sherlock Holmes and Harry Potter. (You can find their EPUB version online for free.) 3. Watch videos about how to show not tell. (You are already good at it still it will help you.) 4. Ask the top authors about some tips too. 5. Ask urself why isn't my novel getting the popularity I want. (Popularity as in comments, reviews, votes etc.) 6. Write, just write. Simple. Write to ur fullest. Wrong, bad, poor, unreasonable still just write. Trial and error is the best way to learn. No one is judging you. Heck no one even knows ur real name. So, just write. And when u wrote a million words u will see that u have come a long way. Just imagining this will make you get goosebumps right? 7. Believe in urself. 8. Love ur work if u don't, no one will. 9. I don't have anymore tips as I am also a newbie. Life isn't easy. Just keep pushing and u will win. Ur novel is good and good things can't remain unhidden. I believe in you. U can do it. And even if ur novel didn't do well u can always write another. U r not Shakespeare, right! No one even knows ur real name. So, just believe in ur self and push through. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO ALL OF YOU.
dang i need the pic Sakura is so thiccccc
Just Sweet Novel. Two Yandere lovers. If you have read or watched Mobseka (Trapped in a dating Sim) , it's similar in starting but with Better MC. Only problem is Chapters are small and we need more chapters atleast 400 more.
So overall, this novel is among my favorites at the moment and I definitely suggest giving it a read. (Review at 270 Chapters)As for my ratings:Writing Quality: 4 Stars - If I was only taking into account the early chapters, my rating would be lower, but the improvement was obvious, especially things like fights and character interaction.Update Stability: 5 Stars - The author hasn't missed a day of updatesStory Development: 3.75 Stars - I feel like this one is purely subjective but I think the story development is good. What you will see from this review is that the story, in general, gets better as you read, and the development is the same. Some may think it's too quick, while others think it's slow, I personally think it's logical. More things get revealed as he gets more powerful, rather than all the info being dumped instantly or him being in the dark.Character Design: 3.7 Stars - I'm sure you can predict what I'm good to say here lol. A lot of the characters are pretty basic at the beginning and there really isn't too much there, but if I were to only take into account the current most recent 160-180 chapters (this review is at chapter 270), I would say it's a 4.5-5 star. A lot of the characters have developed well and personalities make a lot more sense. That being said, the personalities and characters weren't bad at all, there simply wasn't much depth to them at first.World Background: 3 Stars - Currently, this is the weakest aspect of the novel but it kinda makes sense. Some people reading have the misconception that the current overarching plotline is all there is to the story, but the author has said a few times that this is just one section of it. That being said, while there is some mention of the important locations, things like the Abysses, different parts of Earth, or simple things like how people live/how life is there are glossed over. Again, it's getting much better and things are getting described in more detail.Overall - The story is good from the beginning even though it's a bit basic in some aspects. This improves as the story progresses, and it is one of my favorite novels to read currently. I suggest you give it a try.
"... get away from me."
Hi My name is Jimin Nishino, I'm in my 6 year as elementary student. Finally I will graduate next year. I've always been a top student since I was in Kindergarten no one beats me. It makes me think that life without competitor is really boring.
Masked man: "Yes! I am reporting that a couple of minutes ago we noticed an anomaly in the woods."