Okay, so not like other who apparently just rated this novel based on the cover, I thought when i found this novel that it will be good judging on the rating but i was truly disappointed in this novel, i read so far up to the chapter 11 and it is so frustrating to read. Maybe the rest is good but if you want the audience to read your book well the beginning is kinda pretty important. So i wish you good luck for the future autor and i will just read something esle.
The writing quality is abysmal to the point where I have read machine translations that made more sense. The story seems to be all over the place and characters are quite bland the author desperately needs someone to edit past chapters.
Started off with an okay premise and world. Quickly went to absolute crap with filler writing only a handful of chapters in and unnecessary peanut gallery comments that span half a chapter or more. Also, the law of the jungle is so ridiculously crazy when compared to other novels of this type that it actually hurts the whole society being successful enough to travel the galaxy thing the author is trying to portray. Those achievements could literally never happen and it just shows how stupid the author is. I’ve heard a lot from other reviews that this book gets incredibly racist within the coming chapters. Really disappointed.
Currently read through chapter 9. the plot seems intriguing from what I have read so far. Got me hooked and added to the library. A good read indeed,.
This story started out well, but went downhill. The mysteries became easier to solve by chapter 36, and he is planning his entire life around a woman that he is in a fake relationship with. He gives up on appropriate promotions too where the cases could be more interesting. The MC is a major simp, and it also tends to ruin the story. Nationalism rears it's ugly head already as well. I've found that if nationalism is present in the trial read, it only gets worse from there. Overall, the author took the story in the wrong direction and ruined it.
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it gets worse with each chapter after some time
Bonne histoire. Il est rare de trouver de bonnes histoires de ce genre . Bien que les chapitres soit un peu court vu le nombre de mise a jours semaine. J'attends avec impatiences plus de mise à jour.
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So, the story emphasizes on the usual transmigration into fantasy setting but things that make this interesting are many.First of all, the first person Pov suits the story well and the prologue leaves the readers wanting for more.Second, the author itself has a good update speed and is growing as an author.Waiting for smut!!!
This is some really great work. I really enjoyed reading it and I would 100% recommend it. One thing I want to add, some paragraphs are long, make them shorter.Overall, it's amazing!
My man. This story is exceptional. Not too much going on in terms of abilities and such like BOTDS but thats what makes it great, lots of world development, and the character is absolutely perfect. Its not grandiose ya know. Amazing twist on mana and how it works, not used as an ultimate power but as tools instead which gives it power yet not sole reliability. Well rounded book all together.