This is really good work. And I really like the scenarios. The world-building is also great. The power system is also great I hope that dear author can keep up the work and release more chaps. I recommend that everyone read it.
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Before reading this novel make sure to turn off your brain (Yes turn it off)MC is 1 of those Stupid Idiotic Moron.MC also mention that he read a cultivation novel before so he should know that leaving the cave he is currently in or anywhere with a weak/low cultivation is courting death.MC keep complaining all the time despite the system helping him.Plot is very bland, generic. I don't mind the plot if the MC is not a brainless like the MC in here. Yes brainless, Brainless to the core so if you get what I mean then dont waste your time reading this novel, it will definetly gives you a frustration and irritation not worth enjoying.5/5 in writing because it pretty much clear and understandableThe only downside of this novel is the MC.
Here to support a good fellow author and friend on his new book. I haven't read it completely yet, but it does seems to be quite good, it has a constant pace, with almost no breaks, a strong minded and smart main character, and interesting side characters. Grand Void Daoist is already quite experienced in writing Webnovels, so I'm sure he won't dissapoint you with the usual boring cliches, or weak minded, pathetic main characters either. He knows his sh it
This is my second zombie apocalypse novel that I'm reading and honestly it's good but the mc should learn to trust people more even if it is only a little bit that's what I think though well it's really good you guys should try it
This is one of those novels in which, yes, MC does have a cheat, but the cheat will take much longer than normal stories to make MC OP af, and hence all the villains will look amazingly strong when compared to MC.This novel is centred around monster hunting and, power and ability gains from their cores. However, unlike other novels MC doesn't have (nor will he have in the foreseeable future) the ability to singlehandedly take care of a group of monsters.Now the characters : MC's elder sister and their mutual friend the same age as the elder sister. The friend is a girl too. There's almost no talk about other characters and the relationship feels weird tbh. The incest thing as well as weird flirting is tried to be written in a funny heartwarming way but was not to my liking. And the friend relationship is weird as in she takes a kiss on the lips as payment for teaching from MC's sis ??? This whole relationship part is confusing.Overall, I'd say it's a mildly dark novel. It's pretty ok. I don't see myself reading this in the long term. However, please do try it. You never know if this is your type or not just from the reviews.
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please continue the chapters its amazing and I think you could continue the story is interesting the writing is amazing overall please I love your novel
My submission for the WFPC #18, visitors from another world. Feel free to leave a review or comment, I love to get feedback and hear what people are thinking.
The author of this book as wrote the History's number one founder and HIstory's strongest senior brother novels. So based on those two novels, you know this one will be amazing.
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