The story is quite interesting, the concept of a banished immortal. I hope this novel would develop into a good one. Thanks for the chapter anyway. I gave you 5.0 rating so that you would write more hehe. This story is promising. NEED MORE CHAPTER NEED MORE CHAPTERNEED MORE CHAPTERNEED MORE CHAPTERNEED MORE CHAPTERNEED MORE CHAPTER
more pls
Pure trash no matter how you look at it. Even if you can look past the poor translation and the over use of idioms the MC is about as consistent as Rick James on coke. "I want to keep a low profile" and immediately gets involved with a piece of sheet (grapist and lair by disregarding the deal made just the day before) that somehow he befriends on some Chinese level logic.
Shameless review from the author. I know this is not the best of the story out there, but I am trying my best to make it interesting. If you like the story vote for it, write coments and post reviews. I would really appreciate that.
I enjoyed the story, mainly the MC's personality. I love MC's with this kind of persona. I won't say much since it might spoil others and man your writing is so well. I'm confused how this book isn't rated yet ?️??️
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Honestly, why the heck this book doesn't get views, this sooo good. I don't know why WN also not promoting this, even though contract has been signed. .. I think? Anyway, leave it. Aoki-san I support this book continue to write don't drop, best of luck.
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Looks interesting reminds me of The Authors POV, bookmarked waiting for more hopefully a mass release so I know the real potential of this story, very excited.
It's really cool. I'm actually excited to see more bloodlines and evolutions. Please no harem or at least make it so they have sense. Each individual is unique and while it's not impossible, it's very hard to imagine people being comfortable with sharing.
Extremely well written and interesting concept up to chapter 48 and then it seems like it starts to take a sharp turn...I'm currently at chapter 61, I'm thinking about dropping it at this point but I'll be giving it a few more chapters a chance to see if the plot recovers.
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