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A great start of a novel with a familiar topic VRMMORPG hope to read more of it soon. Read the 17 chapters available so far and they were enjoyable despite some cringy dialogues which were still believable. Anyways, I hope the author continues this work and reveives the support he deserves. Gave him all 5 stars since I have seen people give 5 stars for a lot less. So whoever does not agree ... bite me.
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if read it before loving it to if you gonna doing it please don't stop half way and finish it I like to listen it while working so please less ....... or______ that really distracting
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I'm on 25th chapter so far and i still don't know what tf is happening ! !! ?
I didn't expect to find a book where the author actually explains what qi could be and doesn't use plotarmor in a vague way like cultivation works because of qi and qi is qi. I like how the author thinks and didn't find obvious mistakes in the math and science parts. there are a few minor points that could lead to a strong power creep between the later stages if you consider that core cultivators can already destroy mountains from a distance but it should be fine if he stops the exponential growth he currently has between the stages. sure fighting higher stages should be almost impossible but it shouldn't be 1000 vs 1 that is one stage higher and the one is winning without problems or getting hit. at least after the core stage where everyone knows techniques and has a good amount of qi.but that is just me rambling about things that are hard to balance and would be normally readjusted over time while writing but because it is WN and we read the first version, the author has to think more about thinks like that because it is so hard to rewrite entire scenes or plot points.
I loved this could anyone recommend similar novel where mc is focused on training and his speed is not too fast but not too slow eather of becoming a powerhouse
Awesome read and definitely worth it. Pretty good novel as I just flowingly read through the chapters, which is a good thing. Totally RECOMMENDED read for those who are wondering. MC is OP as his cheat allows him to learn and progress his techniques really fast.
An extremely consistent upload story with a refreshing plot. I hope the author takes this as far as he said he has!MC is so far seemingly to be Neutral Good but its too soon.World building is the normal Xianxia cultivation worldCharacter design is slightly cliche thoughOverall 4.4
I really love this story, it's quiet, funny and what made me like it the most are the really cool and well-developed characters.
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