A sci-fi story every reader can look forward to, the immersive story immediately sets you in its captivating world. The story plays out properly and characters are quite interesting. I would advise that the author would properly set in the dialogues using spacing. Overall the issues are quite minor and can easily be overlooked as you keep reading. Would recommend to sci-fi fans. Good job author!
This might be early but the synopsis got me hooked already. The plot is interesting and I hope that it would progress even better in the future!
Not bad, not bad at all. The premise was interesting and I didnt feel bored. The overall writing quality was decent and there weren't flaws that struck me as 'glaring'. Though the pacing was steady for most of the first chapter it did feel a little iffy at certain parts but I guess that could very well be a deliberate thing from the author. This is a good read and if you've stumbled in here wondering whether you should read this or not, the answer is, yes, you should.
I love the characters in this book amd how one of the character is not given a name yet!!! I like the slow but instant affecttion between the 2 leads, which kinda makes it a bit rushed but nonetheless very interesting!! I like the dynamics of the book and m looking forward to reading it!! Fighting, author!!!✊✊
I didn't play lol so after reading synopsis and some reviews (who didn't even read few chapters). I was going to skip. Because of past experience ( there is some good novel badly reviewed by people's because they wanted to select their fav novel without even reading few chapters eg: notebook of fortune, luckiest man, game of life ( bad cover picture and same cover picture as bad novel showed before)). After reading free 39 chapters I actually enjoyed this novel.even though I confused few times bcoz lol terms. Mc is not op and system power is very balanced. And mc has no equipment until now and I don't think author will make him op soon. Just try it may be you guys like it
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I dont know it too early to put some review since it was the only the beginning of the story and since there were still no exciting topic regarding the title its just too early tp give some review if its good or bad story
This quite an interesting read. There are many things you didn't expect to happen and in the end, it always kept you on edge, making you want to read the next chapters. Writing quality is good too.Great Work!
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Okay, I read a couple of chapters. It starts well. The way it's written is good. The quality of English words used here makes this novel much more easier to read. When comes to such unique plot you need lot more clarity. The Author effort is commendable. If you are here for a fresh Novel experience give it a read.
Author here~, i just want to remind you guys that this novel isnot complex novel and isnot really well written like mostly KR novel, the title speak it loud thats is almost look like JP novel (I tried to make the MC not too braindead but dont expect me too much since i am still beginner loll). so i hope to future reader to not bully this noob too much lolll. itsnot that i forbid you to rate this novel lowly thou, since i myself know it better that my novel isnot good enough(trash) to compare with some well written Chinese or KR novel but i hope you guys dont set your expectation bar too high and then get dissappointed later. idk for JP one, because mostly JP isekai novel i read is almost all with some breindead MC, but idk i really enjoy read it tho, you could tell that my taste isnot that good loll. and in the future this novel will go premium(since i already sign the contract, but idk when it will go premium), i hope you guys still supporting me since i am a NEET that lost in his way of life loll (in sort i am broke and poor loll), i dont expect to get alot of gift from you guys, but i hope at least you guys still continued open the chapter when its release and still continued read it if you guys have some free time, maybe you guys think that i have some low self esteem or something, after seeing me rating my own work lowly, i do have some pride of myself after all i already write this far(the really first time novel i write was ended being abndoned in ch 6 loll so i never consider it as my first novel), but i need to be realistic, since i know there is alot of better novel out there that worth your guys money in webnovel after all XD. and idk i after reading that my novel got contracted i have this strange feeling that i want to continued this novel until the end, i will be honest with you guys, i once dreamed to be manga artist but give up after realizing i draw too slow, and its taking too much burden to my body for having less sleep after drawing all day. i know that i really not suited to became pro, maybe i am weakwilled or something, but i choose to have longlife rather than achieving my dream. since then i always lost of myself and don't have confident and always doubt myself. i never doing something else with passion like before when i still dreamed to be manga artist. idk maybe i have no motivation anymore... but... i really want to finish this novel till the end, maybe i will used this chance as my own therapy since i have nothing to do at home anyway, and somehow i do really want to change myself... i have enough of being burden of my family, i am sorry if i unconsciously sharing this with you (some random stranger that dwelling the webnovel). i just hope you guys that still enjoying this novel continued to supporting me... thank you... . . . and in the future i have a plan to (idk if it will be done) draw some character design and continent or maybe a world map for this novel. i just didnt know where should i upload it? ill be honest i dont use social media often, i even almost never playing it i have instagram but i just upload my few artwork there so...(yeah i am a weirdo, and loner lol) maybe its better if i make new instagram to upload some drawing about this novel (i dont want to use my old insta since i dont want my family know that i write ero-ero novel lolll. anyway enjoy your day, and thak you for supporting me. -noob author-