I must say, I'm really not a big fan of goody goody MCs. The plots might seem entertaining, sure, but it's just all over the place. One min. the story has elaborate plans then the next it goes like "no I'm not going to betray them their still my family" or "no I can't hurt them, they're like family to me" or "don't be mad at them even if they're a manipulative and psychopathic family". I mean seriously this is a cultivation novel, there is no place for goodness and naivety here. And lastly, why is it offline Cultivation? I can't seem to understand at what part of the story is it detailed to be offline cultivation.
“I think this plot really works because of how well you've paced the story.”
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This was a great novel well told a story that kept me wondering what’s next! Fascinating and mysterious! I would give this book an overall 5 stars ✨ because it was: well written great story, had an interesting character, and was very entertaining! Well done ? Author
MC is a sucker.The author is probably a cuckold.But do give it a try, maybe you too are a disgusting cuckold.Really do hate the character limit, huh?
Honestly the concept of the novel is unique and great it my opinion but lacks quality to make it shine. the Grammer is atrocious for the novel making it hard to find much value in the plot and flow when it feels unpolished.The interactions between characters are great but they don't flow well back and forth, this can be attributed with the bad grammar but it feels that at some points in the conversation they stop discussing a certain topic, jump to another one the come back to the original topic. it's hard to notice at times but a second read through and you'll pick up on it.I understand this is the Authors first Novel and they are learning through the development of the novel. I just hope they can come back to the early chapters and edit it as well as not include flags of Brazil or America randomly in the novel.
The synopsis got me reading the whole work which I find was a masterpiece. I really loved the flow, let alone the concept of the story itself was very captivating. It allows readers to look forward about what's next to come. A very nice work!
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This story is full of humour despite the title, I like how these ghosts are vibing around with tech and stuff, also the characters lack description, which in this novel is a plus point, after all, ghosts are a misty entity.
great book. this is really hidden gem.brother and sister please try to read this and vote so this novel can continue.i never put a review for trial read before. but this one , i feel the need to put a review. the story so good.it feel like years ago when i read the 1st translated webnovel (LMS and coiling dragon)now i feel like really reading a good webnovel again.
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