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Writing is good and not many mistakes that make it hard to follow, only long paragraphs and small misspellings. Only thing I’d say is a major negative is how dragged the story is- almost 100 chapters just to get to the meeting talked about at the start which was like less than a week away at that point. Makes the story feel stationary.
Lo dejaré... Un asco de protagonistas muy idiota y con complejos más tontos que existen además de andar vestido de mujer desde el inicio prácticamente y tiene uno de los sistemas más OP y no sabe ni hacer uso adecuado de el
It's a great novel depending on your taste. I like It very much, and think It's a really good read. I'm still at chapter 26 but I'll see If it stays good.
This has got be one the best stories I've read here on webnovel in my opinion and I can't believe we finally reached the end and all I got to say is I'm fairly satisfied with then ending as I started this story when only 40 chapters were translated and now I've reached the end of this journey and man everything was great like the world background was just ? and Black Star is legit one of my favorite MC's ever so all in all if you haven't read this well then you just have to man.
hello guys, please le me say first what i said before in the chapters of this story, and then add some more : it's amazing novel great story, and i like it a lot, from all the novel they bring us this time, this is the best of them, help you forget a bit the big problem we have out there ( still yet) i hope with all my heart that this novel will be pick up, and we can all enjoy it relax and have fun with the story, but i am sure as a good novel like this will never be pick up, only lese good novel will be pick this time. anyway, thank you from my heart for all the chapters until now.as i say, there are not many good novel that can make you really Laugh,we mostly see blood and pain, in the novel story and in life, in this novel we have it all, and also the MC later on also fight himself together with his team of tame beasts, a really enjoyable story, if this novel will be pick up, then lets most of us read it and have fun Laughterrelax from the hard days out there and really enjoy urself from a human story, thank you for the wonderful novel here, may you bring us more novel and stories like this in the future, take care and stay safe out there :)
As someone who caught up to the most recent chapter , this novel is decent . it has a great concept but its poorly executed. This is the type of novel you read when you are bored and dont think too much into what you read. Also the fight scene are below average at best. The concept of laws were annoying. The author keeps mentioning laws but never explains what they are or how they help in battles. There are different levels of laws but its never explained why a heavenly law is better than an earthly laws. All we know is the heavenly laws are better and that’s it. The avatar art is never truly explained . All i know is that he makes avatars and the benefits are increased qi reserves, improved comprehension speed and the all share the same mind, so they are share the same techniques. But whats confusing is how they are made and why can’t high level Martial artist tell that the person they are talking to is an avatar. Also when the avatars cultivates their bodies, is the same benefits shared with the rest of the avatars or with just the main body.Like i said great concept , terrible execution . READ ONLY IF YOU ARE BORED.
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Cultivation novel with a panda MC. I will not say much, just than I like it and the fact that not a 'I will kill everyone and be OP after 20 chapter.
If you are looking for a romance and slice-of-life story, you have come to the right place. Angel in the Pandemic is a great story that starts off with an event that changes Desir Snow's and Althea Kong's lives. Through this event we are able to see great character development and insanely good character design. Author Snow does a great job of creating the characters' personalities and backgrounds. The conversations feel so real and the descriptions of emotions make it feel even more real. The story flows in a very smooth manner and does not feel repetitive. You will be able to see a significant change in our couple's personalities and lifestyle by the time you are caught up with the latest chapter.There are basically no grammatical errors. I believe I only spotted one typo and that was it. Updates are every other day or 4 ch/week. Overall, I highly recommend this book if you are looking for a fluffy, chill book to read!
Good for weekly trial reads, so hope it gets picked but I'm sure later in the story it will get worse and worse till I give it up. .
After Reading Top Tier Providence, I found this story quite trashy. I mean ya'know what I mean, and I don't know what was the first created cause I'm not qidian peeps.
Mc is op. low profile. denser than a black hole.It is the first time I have a few years ago I was going on with the other hand if I had a lot to be desired by the end of Tdesired he
