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I wrote a review of this book a while back, and since then, I’ve kept an open mind about it. Honestly, it’s quite good. While it’s not the kind of novel that makes me say, “Wow, this is the best writing I’ve ever seen!” it does have a unique charm. The power system, for instance, is unlike anything I’ve come across before, which adds a fresh layer to the story.The interactions between Jin and the other characters are often interesting, though at times they feel a bit forced. Some chapters feel overly detailed, which might just be a personal preference on my part, but as of now, the writing quality has noticeably improved compared to the first chapter.I also really enjoy the character designs—they’re creative and stood out enough to get me interested into seeing other characters, even though I have my own preferences when it comes to characters (but I won’t dive into that). That said, I think the pacing could use some work. In some sections, the story feels like it’s dragging, while in others, it moves too quickly.The world-building is intriguing, but I feel like the story could benefit from a chapter dedicated to explaining more about the world—its history, lore, and overall context. Adding some insight into the past would help enrich the setting and give readers a deeper understanding of the story.Overall, this novel has come a long way, and I’m looking forward to seeing how it continues to grow and develop.
Where do I begin? If you haven't already begun to read this, then what are you waiting for!?At the time I was writing this, I was able to reach chapter 14, but I was so impatient about writing a review that I decided to write one before catching up to the current chapter.Let's begin with writing quality.The writing quality is superb. Each paragraph would always be so descriptive and immersive to read. I had not seen anything big that would be able to disturb my immersion.For stability of update, I believe that even since starting this novel, the author had constantly been outputting 1-2 chapters each day.Now for the last three. Story Development: the story itself is going well so far; of course, I can not say as much as I want to, considering I have yet to catch up.The Character Design & Development, as well as the world background. The character designs are fantastic, and the development so far seems to be flowing pretty well.Each character has a charming personality of their own, which is not the case in many novels nowadays. My favourite is currently Yuki.The world background: since the world is still in its early stages (I believe), I don't currently expect anything big to suddenly appear. But I'm sure it will be revealed later on, so go read it for yourself!Overall, a 4.8 stars for as (most likely a five star once I progress through the story more XD) Fully Recommended!
First of all, when I looked at the summary, I saw that the novel was very similar to the recent Korean webtoons. "A warrior from the Murim world come modeen world and climbs the tower in the modern world." The story. Frankly, this series doesn't say 'read me' at all. Also, since MC's name is Ye Tian, the series will take place in China. This means that the series will probably contain many Chinese clichés. The only difference from the other series is that it is probably a modern-day harem. That's exactly why I'm going to add this book to the library. Although the series doesn't look good, I like the modern time harem genre, so I'll give it a chance.
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This book is undoubtedly the best novel of all ages in the category of cultivation with leveling system. The plot development seems infinite and very flexible at all times. Compared to any novel in the same category this novel is a complete package which garnered a huge pool of readers who had have different preferences. The main character itself possessed the very ideal characteristics among all protagonist in all novels in the same category. To the author and to the divine master translator, "I wish you all the best". Have a nice day.
Just a short review. Grammar, so many mistakes, 1/10. World building, honestly it is a mess, 3/10. Characters, for 100 chapters are static, 3/10. Story, well it is ordinary, nothing new here 4/10. Overall 3/10. As a side note, pneumonia can be cured, and the sickness can last up to 3 months not 6 years. Unless you are unlucky and the illness takes a severe form which, if not treated immediately, it is fatal. Author do research next time.
omg this is a good book I wish for more.
I really enjoying this story and hoping more updates keep coming
I must say.... this is PEAK???I LOVE IT❤️?
This novel is underrated. The tension is high, the grammar is great, all the male characters are mine.