Awesome, this junior has gained enlightenment from this forbidden scripture ...I will be on my way to spread your Dao and teachings through my divine rod, Amitabh
Omgggg I love the story and character design I love reading novels where the main character is a op psychopath....I NEED MOREEE!! The story so far is amazing great details and I can already see the development of the story it self I can’t wait for more chapters being released!!
It's great! I've never read anything with this plot. Power is taken for a price. That's what I always wanted. The characters development is great and very detailed. go on author!
Writing Quality: The writing quality is good overall, as I can understand it, but there are still some mistakes. I would rate it 4 stars. ⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development: I didn't enjoy the story development much, except for the moments when the main character (MC) used his brain towards the end. That part was good. I would rate the story development 3 stars. ⭐⭐⭐Characters: Unfortunately, I don't like the MC. I found him to be unintelligent, to the point where it frustrated me. It bothered me how easily he allowed others to see him as weak. Although there were some instances where he regained his strength, they were infrequent. Overall, the character development was not satisfactory, and I would rate it 2 stars. ⭐⭐World Background: The world background has some details, but it often lacks sufficient descriptions. For example, the author uses generic names like "ruin city" without providing enough specific details to fully imagine it. I would rate the world background 3 stars. ⭐⭐⭐Updating Stability: The updating stability is excellent, earning it a 5-star rating. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Evaluation: The story has potential, but the MC's development is a major drawback. It took too long for him to start using his brain effectively, and expecting readers to wait for over 50 chapters for that moment is frustrating. I hope the author considers improving the MC's character earlier in the story.(Note to the author: Please consider this review as constructive feedback. It took me 10 minutes to write, and I hope you take it to heart.)
I like it a lot .Impatient to next chapter to come out .More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more PLEASE, prety please ???
Otimo estou ansioso por mais, essa e uma das muçelhores historia que já li até hoje essa foi umas da que mais gostei e espero pelo próximo capitulo.
The story so far is pretty good and although theres only five chapters it looks like it could become popular but thats in the future.(just dont drop it plz)
Alessandro Mircea could withstand the curse of the moon, he was the Lord of every night but most especially the moonless nights when he became one with the darkness. After the death of his father Vlad Dracula he became'Voivode of the house of Draculesti ' murdering everyone who had stood in his way, including those who killed his lifemate because of an acclaimed prophecy. Half a millennium years later,a female writer began to publish books that gave away the secrets of the vampires and the identity of their dangerous lord. Alessandro swore to put an end to her mortal life. The strikingly beautiful red head bore resemblance to his longdead lover. Could she be Mia or could she be even more dangerous than Mia? Dangerous enough to steal the heart of the powerful immortal lord................................
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very good setting but feels like ai writing it. same set of words over and over again to describe something or some situation how important or insignificant it may be is becoming quite monotonous. i assume English is your 3rd language as it is mine thus you are using this kind of writing style. I hope you can improve in this endeavour. all the best.
It is a nice story please continue on ****** it but the translation is really bad, I really liked the story but suddenly it ends i want to continue reading it