"Someone pinch me. I've got to be dreaming."
"He lost the notepad," Castiel says with a serious face.
He was feeling revulsion.
Haters can hate but this is a good translanation, also if you guys think it's so bad then you should try do some translanation and then make them accurate, stop complaining as you get to read some translanation for free, wow so many people are unappricative, you all need to pull the stick out and chill out. If you don't like it then go on some random form and troll not here where people come to read. This is one of the reasons people quit translations because of ungrateful people such as you all, so much hate, you need to go get some stress relief with your right hand or something because it doesn't need to be squirted here.
Read up to 506. To be honest, I was hesitant to read this after reading Nanomancer. I didn’t think that Reili would write something else at the same level as his prior work but was pleasantly surprised. Love the characters and Alice’s development so far. I do think there’s a lot going on with all the gods, the hidden WILL and now Alice and the Queen having part divinity and the new cult but it doesn’t feel complicated which is nice). Overall I can’t wait for more chapters.
Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this one was a little bit more complicated than the others so it wasn’t a bad thing but i was kinda scared of the fact it wasn’t the best but i just didn’t like it and i was scared of the bad ending and the ending and the bad end so it just wasn’t the right one lol but i guess i just didn’t know it wasn’t bad at the time and it wasn’t that good so it wasn’t that it wasn’t good enough for the bad end and i just didn’t know (idk why bad end came up so much but I was just tapping the middle suggestion in my phone) Besides that bs I just spewed this novel is top tier
Such a wholesome read. I loved the start so much. Yanyan is quite the mischievous character so look out for that lol. Beautiful grammar, no spelling errors. The book is a bit fast paced but that doesn't make it a bore at all! Love love love.
looking good I want to see how this story works ???
The author tried to write something absolutely amazing but in trying to do so he turned this into a mediocre one. The story seems to be inconsistent and it seems like the author didn't really plan ahead(example - soul sizer points turned from 100 to 1000 just to support the authors new declaration that ouroboros wont let a lesser bloodline exist, and I think the author added this point because he might have thought that soul of light and darkness are too burdensome or redundant or overkill to have). A good world build is necessary to make a good story but overdoing it can also ruin the story. This author overdid to the extent that the story is going at a sluggish pace. Moreover worldbuild generally means describing the cities, environment conditions, their culture, art, architecture, that worlds history etc. but this story's over extensive world build (or gibberish to put it simply) is mostly focused on the unending philosophical pondering of the MC rather than the aspects I stated above
I see authors doing this in their new novel so....This is my first novel so wish me luck.I wrote chapter 1 of this novel during lunch break then it hit me. What if I post it here?
I'm a dog I love spring rolls and I like your novel! Keep it writing don't drop this!I'm a dog I love spring rolls and I like your novel! Keep it writing don't drop this!I'm a dog I love spring rolls and I like your novel! Keep it writing don't drop this!
So far so good! carry on writing please! Can't wait to read more.