The story is fairly good (basic but good) but the translation drags it down tremendously. Unable to properly state the rules of the world, making it feel flimsy, character description suffering the same. Numbers are irrelevant as usual with shoddy translations, but the general gist still comes across if you're paying attention.
this novel is trash reading 10 chapters I don't think I have capability to read this trash any longer I mean mc sisters are all crazy for him practically there is not normal siblings bond rather than it is harem novel with his sisters It is really disgusting ? for me
It's great novel but I feel like it's same to a manga it's deference character and deference line but same location . I just support this novel 5 star because I can feel like I'm reading a manga?
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
I really liked your description it's quite good. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon.. Looking forward to it.
1) I absolutely love your story and you have my addiction burning.2) The only real constructive feedback that I have for you is that when you realise you are using some words too many times (ex. Recomposing or ingress) that you use the thesaurus to give you more options to expand your vocabulary. 3) Last thing, try to utilize words that aren't a mouthful for people to read. Using a softer approach for the sentence "his ingress to the royal capital was a grand spectical to witness." could be changed to "his entrence to the royal capital was a grand sight to see." Those are just some general statements I made up, but the second sentence is far easier for people to read vice the former.4) Again I love your story and your use of some interesting vocabulary and these are just some suggestions that could help amplify your writing. THANK YOU AND I HOPE YOU GIVE THIS A READ OVER :D
My main issuie is grammar, the overall story is decent.
I am in love with this already. Love you Anna
Hung on right from the start
This is a good read! seven chapters read, and I'm completely hooked! The writing style is amazing, easy to understand and really smooth! Everything about this book is intriguing, and catches attention to make one want to explore and immerse oneself into HA story! I love the book and highly recommend
I like Marshall and Stella's character ... a romantic scene between them. Rooting they will end up together. when will she divorce keegan...
It is a little slow at times. But folks say I am to direct