Good writing. MC that reincarnated that act the way they should from the start. Good plotting. Even MC know how to build himself that show how he is reincarnate person but still act the way his age to not raise suspicion. Really enjoy character development of each character. Cant wait for next chapter. All in all, enjoy the good product
wish fulfillment.
This needs to get picked. Flaws:-Poor worldbuilding-The cultivation realms have not been explained yet (CH 19)-Story is shallow-Slightly wonky translations, still very understandable though. I’ve read far worse, this is very much tolerable.Merits:-Fun read.-Better than most of the stuff that gets picked nowadays.-Decently conceptualised system.Overally I’d give this a 3/5 it I’m giving it a 5 cuz I want it to get picked.
Great story .....this is a work of art ........waiting for more updates........................ .............................................???
The story was good, up until the point where Luna died. I was expecting something magical to save Luna from her illness; I skipped the chapters until I found out Luna actually died. Although I don’t want to drop this novel, it’s too depressing for my heart.
Thanks to the author for putting in the effort. It just so happens that it's not a cop of tea that would suit majority's taste.i think the stars covered all that I could think of rating this novel in.
I actually liked reading this.Well I will miss the story.It may have been a bit too fast to put it on Amazon and remove chapters.Would rather have sorted through patreon like others said.
Repeated grammatical mistakes, wrong words used.Author needs a proofreader. Preferably a human proofreader and not a machine/bot.Story is great, character is great, world is great. Just writing quality needs improvement.
Wtf??, what is happenning? Why are there Original Novels spawning in here now? Is there some kinda bunch of bonus and stuff?!! Anyways so this novel is kinda new to me, because it uses a girl as an mc to a vrmmorpg novel so maybe it will be good. I am really expecting some ******* of usage of her skill as a mage who controls winds I really hope she is creative enough to unleash the full potential of the thing we breathe in.
This book is goodOne of the few books to have a main character using the light element but not darkness and fire????Author please don’t drop this
I’m here to say this got removed from the voting pool on the Que of books and I don’t see updates I’m sad it got removed today :(Is this story dropped forever???? someone please steal this and write your own I’ll drop $$$$
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