The great work you have created has piqued my interest and left me wanting to know more about Arthur and his journey in the Argoth Continent. The themes of revenge and redemption are powerful and relatable, and the addition of the Beast Taming system adds an intriguing layer to the story. Keep writing and developing the world and characters with care, and I have no doubt that you will create a captivating and thrilling story that readers will enjoy.Good Luck ???
At this point, I’m only going to be reading novels that don’t have the entire plot in the title.Thats all i wanted to say really, was bored and felt like i should put that out there. Also i get Exp i think, so i have that going for me. Also wondering if Authors read their own novel after its done? Or they just find that tedious, I know i would. Like they spent ALOT of time writing and re-editing it, they know the plot, they know whats going to happen. No reason to read it again….I was going somewhere with this….oh well. Have a great day/night everyone, dont get covid or hurry up and get better already. Also some of you need to go outside and touch some grass.
the story of this novel is good and the background is fantastic
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So far so good nothing to complain about the story hopefully he starts practicing lightning related spellssoon its my favorite elementKeep up the good work hoping for a update soon as possible
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The most important point for now, in my opinion, is the quality of writing. There are many mistakes in the sentences, for example words that are missing ... It is difficult to understand the story in these conditions and it could discourage many. I therefore recommend reviewing your sentences before publishing the chapters.
okay another review I finally reached the current chapter and I got to say this is a diamond in the rough the mc is complicated the world is not as simple as it seems and if you want to relax and read something funny and relatable give it a try the character's in this book are really very entertaining and the way the mc sees things from his own perspective is eye opening
Ahh... I like that you started with a family and the protagonist being extraordinary, better than the stereotype loses.The writing was fair and easy to hook into...while the character tone looked a bit unnatural. might work on that.There's not may error I can found throughout the first six chapters, the author has worked his muscle on that.Overall it has potential, like most other vrrpg novels, though its seemed a bit different than those.Good luck Author for the sprity...
The author has put a lot of effort into writing this, and he even rewrote the first few chapters several times. However, I recommend he get a proofreader, because while everything is readable, some syntax errors are very distracting to the reader. Besides that, I think the author has a very unique writing style that is amusing to read. Personally, I think his writing is a lot like how he texts in real life with his friends, and I think that this allowed many readers to feel closer to the narrator. A warning to future readers though-- the main character is very dubious and hateful while the primary love interest gets cuckolded more and more in the later chapters. The intimate scenes are also quite lacking.
Very impressed with the author's ability to split scenes. The attention to detail with specific points in the story shows that the author is both learned and experienced in those types of details. I also appreciate the obvious research that went into mythology/folklore, as it makes the story that much more relatable. Special thanks to the author for the amazing read! I'm never more than an hour behind the chapter upload, and legit look forward to it in my day.
Hell yeahhhhh. I'm soo excited that this is getting picked. I've been waiting for months now. Also for those who are complaining, when trial read was introduced webnovel said that it might bring back the novels that didn't get picked before. So please stop rating it low just because this was picked. Cuz there are many including me who are waiting with hope that trial novels which didn't get picked before get picked.Also above thing isn't the reason I rated this 5. It's because I freaking love this novel. Do give this novel a try if you like iras kinda troupe with no racism bs but with video games.I'm really sorry for my grammar guys. I'm pretty sure I fked it up badly.