author really needs to work on making the narrative more compelling by doing more of showing and less info dumping! though the grammar is impeccable and conversations between characters are well fleshed out, I feel the story could benefit from more character depth, especially from the MC. Ortega seems a bit too basic to me ... overall it's not bad. highly recommend for urban lovers out there
the author captures the fantasy genre exceptionally. this is a great book and a total recommendation of a read! i hope we see more of this up and coming young person
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Woooow what a story. Author I can't wait for the rest of your story. Such a good story. I will love watching it TV though. But try and update as possible as you can. In good job author ????
To be honest, I'm disappointed, why? Because I really enjoy this yet it only consist of 7 chapters!? I keep scrolling and now it's the end? Author I need more of this. I really like your system and despite the fact that your first language isn't english, I can say that your description is easy to understand and very vivid. I hope you continue writing this masterpiece.
Ótima história Mano continue assim ✌???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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Gostei muito do livro. Adorei a forma como os personagens foram desenvolvidos e como o autor escreve, sem falar no plot da historia, que se desenvolve muito bem.... Meus parabéns ao autor.
i love this story very much ❤❤❤............ can't wait for more chapters .................❤☺ keep up the good work ?❤❤❤❤❤❤????
About world Mythology, most protagonist are from Greek mythology and the weapons are from various mythology all over the globe that's all thank you
Extremely - EXTREMELY - difficult to read! It took immense effort just to decipher the sentences. I had hoped the story would improve over time, but it unfortunately didn't. The first chapter was hideous, the second showed improvement, but then after the third, quality dipped to all-time-low again.Let's forget about writing quality for a moment and address the elephant in the room: story development and character design. The protagonist so far has 0 (yes zero!) personality. We don't know anything about him apart from the one tiny little detail that he's a transmigrator from our Earth. You would think after this abysmal display of character design things can't possibly get any worse! But no! Somehow it does.The protagonist in a display of absolute genius decides to reform the government to not only have a constitution, but a constitution which directly limits the Emperor's (the MCs) power. Transforming the absolute monarchy into, you guessed it, a constitutional monarchy. This author is clearly either completely ignorant about historical social evolution, or worse...a liberal snowflake.
This novel is one of the best I have ever read…. It gives the perfect balance bettween gameworld and real world both being interesting on their own with there own unique background that I enjoy. When talking abt real world and if he can get stronger or powerful in it….. Yes. Even if that part was slightly confusing to find out or not explained as much so far. It is well worth it. And this game world seems to be more than just a game with the subtle hints…. Makes this story even more interesting since everything can mean more than what an already great world and story than it already is. So even if the game world isn’t more than what it seems it is still a great read overall.Author thanks for making a great story! Please keep uploading.