It feels like the writer took Kiran from end of the devil's cage and put him in a new world. Like with Kiran, I expect him to gain everything, lose almost nothing, and eat whatever he sees. It feels great and as one of the smartest MC's, even though there might be a lack of impulsiveness might be slightly sad, you'll never truly see the plot armor. This I love, from there my love.
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This book can be summed up in two words: wasted potential. You can feel that the author has a feel for the world he created and its background, but the info dump makes the story unreadable. Instead of discovering the world at the same time as the main character, we get random chapters of info dump about something completely unrelated. Even action scenes full of tension are simply cut to make place for an explanation of the background of a random dead race or character that you won’t give a f about in a couple chapters. Yeah, so I tried to keep going and to hope that the info dump would stop at some point to focus on the story, but it hasn’t. So try it out if you don’t mind a slow paced story that doesnt follow a linear pespective.
Still waiting for the next chapter please ?????????????????
A legend in the making.must read for all the bored readers. Essentially the Mc lives a secret life in addition to his normal life all in an age of exploration and colonisation.
Well written with lots of potential but unfortunately lacking in a few aspects. This novel has great writing quality and an engaging and entertaining plot, compared to most webnovels this is definitely in the top 1% however there are still a few things that should definitely be fixed. (As of chapter 86) The timeline makes no sense. The game started in January of 2100, however he doesn’t meet Emma (Lotus) until into 2102 (According to his last life flashback). Although the events that have taken place in the story so far seem like they may have happened in a week they ‘supposedly’ happened over a few months, even then it would still be early or mid 2100, in six months his mother would be dead. No need to mention 2102 plus however many months it took for him and Emma to have a serious relationship. Another major plothole I’ve realized while writing this is the supposed ‘months’ that have passed. All the fighting has taken place over the course of a few days, not counting time in between events, this is fine, they could have been doing lots of stuff in between that we just don’t see, but we can tell this is not happening since the MC has no growth between events, all his skills, levels, items etc have been gained in the mere few days we have seen. So unless you are going to tell me that he has been spending the majority of these multiple months he has been playing and supposedly been to busy to spend time with his parents (according to a few chapters ago) doing absolutely nothing this simply doesn’t make any sense. Even if this time issue was fixed and the time was compressed back to a few days it would still not fix the issue of his mother living years past when she supposedly died. The next point isn’t a plot hole but something that irks me endlessly the main character is pathetic and brain dead. Why did he not immediately get his mother checked for cancer and treatment when reincarnated. You would think they would have a whole lot of a better chance at treating cancer if you noticed it 1-2 years earlier, but no, he says nothing. Second the whole situation with Emma honestly frames the MC to be a weak and pathetic simp. And then we have this last chapter where he just completely goes off the rails the second he hits some adversity, he hasn’t event attempt to change his mom’s future yet and now he’s going to throw his life away, again, sad and pathetic. Additionally the ease at which he gains power and the OPness of the power he gains is a bit annoying, I’m not trying to complain about the MC being OP in a OP mc novel but it seems like it’s gone a little to far. He can turn into a ghost indefinitely and still use his esper powers (which might I add have no energy cost) to kill whatever he wants. While as a ghost it seems he cannot be harmed by physical attacks, infact we have not yet seen him get harmed at all while a ghost (Does this make him invincible? I assume there is some limit, even still it seems like to most creatures cannot harm him while he can kill whatever). If this wasn’t enough with synergy between his fire skill and the skill that lets him change into an animal he can turn into a phoneix, with his flames around him even if he dies (which he does) he simply is reborn in the fire and can continuously deal damage to more powerful enemies without any risk. (Again, is he invincible? I’m honestly not sure)
Fantastic novel, good translation quality and regular updates. Original translation at wuxiaworld please support translators there. This is applicable for battle through the heavens, heavenly jewel change, unrivalled tang sect, coiling dragon, desolate era, i shall seal the heavens, renegade immortal, skyfire avenue, warlock of the magus world,perfect world, wu dong qian kun, a record of a mortal's journey to immortality, legend of the dragon king, terror infinity, sovereign of the three realms, tales of demons and gods, the great ruler, child of light and a will eternal
A Racist's tale: Making Hitler blush. Srsly tho this is some mega racist's fap material, ignore the other people trying defend this either they are blind to the truth or trying to justify their racist rap material so they can fap in peace.This may get deleted, I don't care just leaving it out there for the few who read this before it goes away.
Brain dead MC with an indestructible plot armor.People says don't go more than 3 meters deep (because its very dangerous) but he does anyway.Butts in to other peoples business for no reason and the only thing he gains is enemy.Has an opportunity to learn skills ; he chooses the books based on their names. Not even opening the book to check out the descriptions or anything.Not to mention author making mc's soul beast look like a joke so that others can mock him.OH and mc never questions about the world he lives in, techniques that he's using.(If you don't know, ask your teacher... smh)Don't bother reading this.....100ch+
It has been a few weeks since I liked a story premise well enough to write a review. This book has pretty good grammar and the sentences read well. It never messes up the genders. But the X and repeating same X where they need a different synonym or deleting the 'and X' is still a problem. Skill/Spell names have horrible inconsistency. Most of my 2 Star deduction is due to this. Also, a few too many tropes like 'pouring the whole bottle of pills' are here. This particular trope bugs me a lot. Respect the Pills!
Really enjoying this so far :) !!!!!!!!!
this story is good and bad at the same time. i like the story but writing quality is bad. it fails to create thirst. this story could have been really great with more skilled writing.