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?Everybody was kung-fu fightingThose kicks were fast as lightningIn fact it was a little bit frighteningBut they fought with expert timing??They were funky China men from funky ChinatownThey were chopping them up and they were chopping them downIt's an ancient Chinese art and everybody knew their partFrom a feint into a slip, and kicking from the hip?
This is my favorite story from what’s available now. MC is very unlucky and cannot live longer than a few months whenever he tries simulating a cultivation life. You have to live to 5 years old before you start getting benefits from the system. He has a very talented cultivator in town to celebrate her grandfather’s birthday when he gets the option to have others go into the simulation in his stead. He figures he’ll have her go in and see if she can do what he can’t. She lives to the 5 year mark on her first try, after being tricked into it. MC gets to chose 1 of 3 rewards that she earns for living to certain milestones. She then gets 1 random reward that isn’t as good as the MC’s but is very beneficial to her cultivation. One MC gets to a certain level of strength he gets the opportunity to send more people into it and get to chose from a second set of rewards. That’s where the 40 chapters ends, with him getting to have 2 people in the simulator at once. Definitely worth the read and votes!
where to find raw or mtl of this novel i want to read it raw and pls pick this book ,.......................................................
This is a new novel and author. This means normal issues seen with new authors pop up every here and there but the story has great potential and is of reasonable quality already. I personally am very much looking forward to see how this novel progresses. Go for it author.
Don't read it if you are Japanese or Korean, you'll have to get past a lot, A LOT, of undeserving hatred. Not sure which other nationalities the author goes for after chapter 660.It was a fun read at the beginning. Fun power system, reasonable and relatable MC, satisfying story arcs. Then baam, the author goes nuts. It was so heartbreaking to see a story you enjoy go 'Phantom Menace' on your bottom. The author makes a point of going out his way, forcing situations where foreigners are bad and jealous of the MC and deserve righteous face smacking while people all over China cheer for him. Not the tritors though. You know, people who like anything non-chinese? They soon get what they deserve.I laughed most of the times when things like this came out. Maybe because I 'm not from a country author tries to bash. We have an MC whose power and fame starts off with publishing various literature stuff he basically plagiarised (some from other foreigners that author hates) and the author is actually shameless enough to narrate the story in such a righteous tone that I cringed when I wasn't laughing. Dude, your main character isn't the genius you try to write him as nor is he better than the strawman foreigners who had actually put in real effort to better themselves. Your MC literally plagiarises the works of other great people that your power system made disappear. Your MC plagiarised Snow-white and later on you make him show off before Americans. I laughed, a lot, at the MC. It felt like the author actually turn off parts of his memories while writing some of the arcs.Let me give you a fake example which can easily fit inside this story.A Japanese reknowned poet will come to visit a Chinese university. He will be lecturing some stuff and sneering and spitting snarky remarks at the Chinese students, calling them less-them-genious and stuff. The foreign students would laugh along with some traitors. The Chinese students would get angry and shout and grind their teeth but what can they do right? Some will post the video on social media and Chinese people would get upset and stuff and call for justice but the reknowned poet would post something more infuriating. Then the Chinese celebraty MC would call for a duel, learn Japanese ancient masterful long lost poetry in a second through the system, face smack him, give a righteous lecture of how Japanese people are waste. The Chinese people will shed tear in their greatness, and face smack the foreigners again because they are great. The 'traitor fan girls' would call for MC's arrest, MC will get arrested, plagiarise a long lost poem of how prison can't hold the awesomeness of a true Chinese and people will lose their mind at his awesomeness. Some fan girls will convert and the rest will get a face smack and MC will be released and of to stealing more stuff. While at it, maybe destroy the Japan economy too, just for the sake of it.I'm not being fair. The real arcs are way more detailed and way worse. Author narrates in a way that feels like he's expecting the readers to bask in awe with MC Literacy prowess even though we know where it came from. Instant powerups with no real effort. None. Any other stories of power system at least makes an effort on top of having an op system. I would be ok with that if not for the self oblivious hypocritical story arcs.I still read it though.
Is actually pretty good. I like the story so far.????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Bad translation. And typical Chinese rubbish, while reading my brain hurts ? !
What a start! I can absolutely say this, with all certainty that this book's first 10 chapters are pretty solid. The book is well written, plus the translator has done a great job. I just hope that the quality will remain constantBase on the first 10 chapters:No stupid cliches!
Thanks for the novel author, now i need 500+ chapters, give me please, 21 chapter is too low, why is discovered this too early, :( :(Thanks for the novel author, now i need 500+ chapters, give me please, 21 chapter is too low, why is discovered this too early, :( :(
It's a nice read at the start but it gets annoying later on cuz the author dumps some of the plots and more annoying is that the mc is the same age through out the end of the novel. The story is the same old face slapping cuz of the misunderstanding he is a kid and the system sign in rewards are rare in later chapters. The system was only there for some plot development later on that I even began to doubt did he still have the system.